Still the remedy

Monday, March 2, 2009

You have stolen my being, my identity.
By making me imbibe the wine of love
you have intoxicated me.

With one glance, my free wandering spirit
has been captured by you.

I gave my life to you, my very substance;
you took my tears without glancing back.

You carried the soul from my body
and yet you are still part of that soul;
you inflicted pain, but are still the remedy.

You destroyed the kingdom of my heart
with the sword of coquetry,
but are still its sovereign ruler.

109 comments:

Alec said...

and yet you are still part of that soul;
you inflicted pain, but are still the remedy.


love still alive

Ashok said...

You destroyed the kingdom of my heart
with the sword of coquetry,
but are still its sovereign ruler.

Prachi Pandey said...

I gave my life to you, my very substance;
you took my tears without glancing back.

Anonymous said...

You carried the soul from my body
and yet you are still part of that soul;
you inflicted pain, but are still the remedy.

Anonymous said...

You destroyed the kingdom of my heart
with the sword of coquetry,
but are still its sovereign ruler

Anonymous said...

You have stolen my being, my identity.
By making me imbibe the wine of love
you have intoxicated me

Anonymous said...

good one i love ur poems

Anonymous said...

You carried the soul from my body
and yet you are still part of that soul

Puja said...

and yet you are still part of that soul;
you inflicted pain, but are still the remedy

Dr.Nishi Chauhan said...

You destroyed the kingdom of my heart
with the sword of coquetry,
but are still its sovereign ruler

Som said...

Nice poem but too much of spirit and soul ..

By the way "you inflicted pain, but are still the remedy" ... I just hope you haven't hear the Song "Rehna Tu ..." from Delhi 6 .. :P

will surely follow you from now on ..

David O. Brink said...

I gave my life to you, my very substance;
you took my tears without glancing back.

David O. Brink said...

I never knew there would be a better tomorrow
But you've come into my life and taken away all my sorrow

My days of sadness are a thing of the past
Because I have found true love at last

My days of emptiness are gone for good
Because you fill a void in my heart that you should

You've opened a window
You've shown me the light
And my love for you will continue to burn bright.

Anonymous said...

awake each day with a smile
And greet it with a laugh;
The world is a treasure to me
Because of you.

Every time I think of something sad,
I replace the thought- with you!
My mind is instantly changed
And my heart is filled with gladness.

Every breath I take is meant for you,
I live this life surrounded in joy
And I bathe in the promise of your love,
My soul belongs to you.

Each time I see something beautiful
I want to take it and bring it to you;
My life has so much meaning now
All because of you.

Anonymous said...

At last, when all the summer shine
That warmed life's early hours is past,
Your loving fingers seek for mine
And hold them close at last at last!
Not oft the robin comes to build
Its nest upon the leafless bough
By autumn robbed, by winter chilled,
But you, dear heart, you love me now.

Though there are shadows on my brow
And furrows on my cheek, in truth,
The marks where Time's remorseless plough
Broke up the blooming sward of Youth,
Though fled is every girlish grace
Might win or hold a lover's vow,
Despite my sad and faded face,
And darkened heart, you love me now!

I count no more my wasted tears;
They left no echo of their fall;
I mourn no more my lonesome years;
This blessed hour atones for all.
I fear not all that Time or Fate
May bring to burden heart or brow,
Strong in the love that came so late,
Our souls shall keep it always now!

Anonymous said...

How can you ache and crave for someone's touch
When you have never felt it?
I do this for yours, though,
And the yearning grows more each day

I have never wanted anything in my life
As much as I want you
When you whisper such sweet love
In my ear when we talk

You make me melt into a puddle
Of complete helplessness
You have become my every waking thought
And my every dream at night

I breathe in so hard
Trying to catch my breath when we can't talk
I close my eyes so tight
Hoping when I open them you will be there

But I know I have to wait
Until the time is right
It seems so far away
That I think I am losing my mind

I want to breathe in your scent
And keep it with me all day long
I want to taste your love for me
By kissing your sweet lips

I want to feel your body next to me
So when you leave for awhile I can hold on
I just want you to know
That I really do love you

When the day comes and we are together
You will always know and feel this
I will always hug, kiss and love you
Every moment of the day and night

...You will never have another touch unfelt

Anonymous said...

With this rose, I not only give you merely a rose,
but I give you my heart and soul.
I send to you all the love I have to give,
and anything else that would give me the
chance to touch your heart.

With this rose, I reveal all my
thoughts and feelings about you
that I have withheld for so long.
I feel when I am with you... I am like a rose,
not because of it?s beauty,
but because I am able to bloom and grow with you.

To me you are like a rose's sunshine,
so full of energy and light,
that never does it fail to lift my spirits.
Just by the sound of your voice and that look in your eye.

I could never tear my eyes from you,
you are able to make my life worth living.
But, without you, just like a rose,
I would wither and die.
Not all at once, but little by little,
petal by petal.

Slowly at first, because you have made me
stronger and stronger each day you're with me.
But eventually, without you, I will loose
all those beautiful petals you have given me.

Anonymous said...

The lover sleeps and amid his dreams
His angel comes on sunlit beams.
To waken him with kisses sweet,
For her love for him is oh so deep.
She wakes him with her caresses light
Upon his skin and smiles so bright.
And in her eyes, he sees the love
She feels for him neath stars above.
He comes to her to gently place,
Kisses upon her neck and face.
To caress her body and touch her soul.
For together two become a whole.
The love they make is deep and true
And in this embrace their love renew.
When all is done and all's been said,
Upon her breasts he rests his head.
And hears her heart beat for him alone.
A greater love, he's never known.

Anonymous said...

The lover sleeps and amid his dreams
His angel comes on sunlit beams.
To waken him with kisses sweet,
For her love for him is oh so deep.
She wakes him with her caresses light
Upon his skin and smiles so bright.
And in her eyes, he sees the love
She feels for him neath stars above.
He comes to her to gently place,
Kisses upon her neck and face.
To caress her body and touch her soul.
For together two become a whole.
The love they make is deep and true
And in this embrace their love renew.
When all is done and all's been said,
Upon her breasts he rests his head.
And hears her heart beat for him alone.
A greater love, he's never known.

jinksy said...

I guess two are always better as one.

Rahul Viswanath said...

I keep wondering how you get to write them ...... good job bud !!! Loved it ...

Dr. Neha Srivastav said...

You carried the soul from my body
and yet you are still part of that soul;
you inflicted pain, but are still the remedy

Thats Love eh!!

Anonymous said...

gave my life to you, my very substance;
you took my tears without glancing back.

Anonymous said...

You carried the soul from my body
and yet you are still part of that soul;
you inflicted pain, but are still the remedy.

Anonymous said...

u do write well......this one was another good 1 4m u

Anonymous said...

You carried the soul from my body
and yet you are still part of that soul;
you inflicted pain, but are still the remedy

Anonymous said...

and yet you are still part of that soul;
you inflicted pain, but are still the remedy

i am what i am said...

wow!!!! talk about trials and tribulations of love!!!! amazing. isn't it ironical that the person you love the most hurts you the maximum?????

Adisha said...

So sweet !!! Like a tale ..

wonderful !!

Cheers,
adisha

Dr. Aradhna said...

You carried the soul from my body
and yet you are still part of that soul;
you inflicted pain, but are still the remedy

True?

Er. Snigddha Aggarwal said...

and yet you are still part of that soul;
you inflicted pain, but are still the remedy.

Er. Paayal Sharma said...

You carried the soul from my body
and yet you are still part of that soul;
you inflicted pain, but are still the remedy.

Er. Paayal Sharma said...

once loved you so much
And for so long.
Why did you leave
When I did nothing wrong?

Your smile was once the sun
On a dark, rainy day.
It would clear up the sky
And keep it from being gray.

Your eyes were once the shine
Of the world's glowing light.
Or were they the twinkling stars
That once filled the night?

Your hands once had power
To give me the softest touch.
They'd always give me a slight tingle,
Which is why I loved them so much.

Your hugs were once the medicine
That'd change a frown to cheer.
A shiver would run through my body
Every time I feel your love near.

Your kisses were once the wind,
They were fresh and breezy against my face.
They were gentle, so gentle,
It's something no one will replace.

Anonymous said...

But, now you like someone else,
And it's driving me insane.
Although it's over for us,
The love we had still remains.

And so I tell myself...
Never again will I cry.
You were once everything to me,
That I can't deny.

But I couldn't keep my promise
And broke out in tears.
The hours I've cried feel like days,
The days feel like years.

Anonymous said...

One glance from her eyes
so dark and so brown,
put him under her spell,
his world spun around

One smile from her lips,
his heart skipped a beat,
her womanly spell,
knocked him right off his feet

One word, just one look,
he flew out of control,
and her magical spell,
touched the heart of his soul

Her voice of pure velvet,
his thoughts were now drifting,
her magic and laughter,
her joy so uplifting

For her magic, her charms,
her feminine ways,
would enchant him would capture him,
all of his days

His heart was now hers,
his love hers to keep,
for the power of her magic,
that moved him so deep

For the love in her eyes,
sent him out of control,
and her magical spell,
played the harp of his soul.

Anonymous said...

You and me,
Together forever we will be;
As long as there is Heaven and Hell,
We will always be well;
Every time I look into your eyes,
I know my heart never lies;
About the way my love for you is true,
And for that love of you anything I would do;
When I feel the sweet feel of your touch,
It just makes me want you so much;
Inside my arms,
So I may protect you from all harms;
Even when the world is over,
Only one thing will still hover;
And that thing will always be,
The love between you and me

Anonymous said...

Sometimes we argue, I don't know why.
Then I sit and wonder, why do I cry?

I cry because I love you,
I cry because I care,
I cry because I feel we have a love so rare,
sometimes I'm afraid I'll turn around and you won't be there.

I love you every minute,
I love you every day,
I even love you when we argue,
I love you when we play.

Sometimes I've wondered do you love me too,
then I look in your eyes and
I know it's true.
So when I say something a little crazy
or I do something you don't feel is right,
Please, let's try to work it out so we won't fight.

Some people take relationships for granted
it's sad to hear but true,
I don't want this to happen, not with you.
I want our relationship to be completely from the heart
so we both know, no matter what we go through we will never part

Anonymous said...

When in Spring the flowers bloom,
And everything is born anew,
Why do I have to cry?
I could be sharing this beauty with you...
Why, oh why do I have to sigh?

When the sun in the Summer noon,
Shines so brightly upon the land,
Why do I have to cry?
I could be holding you by the hand...
Why, oh why do I have to sigh?

Winds blow tenderly in Autumn,
And the leaves so gently fall,
Why do I have to cry?
I know we could have had it all...
Why, oh why do I have to sigh?

Cold outside in Winter evenings,
Colder here within my heart,
Why do I have to cry?
I never wanted us to be appart...
Why, oh why do I have to sigh

Er. Paayal Sharma said...

You make me smile
when I'm having a bad day.
You make me laugh
at everything you say.

You're always there
no matter where you are.
You come rushing towards me
even if you're very far.

You enjoy my company
You smile when you see me.
You're interested in what I have to say
You like me for more than what you see.

When I'm afraid
You're there to hold me tight.
You tell me you love me
and that everything is gonna be alright.

You give me so much
more that I could ever give.
I want you in my life forever
for as long as I live.

Anonymous said...

The perfect girl used to be only in dreams it seems,
but when I first saw you, it changed everything.
I knew right off that you were the one,
I hoped we would be together, I knew we’d have fun!
Whenever we hug, I get chills up my spine,
I think about you nonstop; all the time,
Nothing can change what you mean to me,
you’re all that I want, all that I need,
when I look into those beautiful brown eyes,
it makes me realize,
you are the most gorgeous girl on earth.
I found my girl so now I can end my search.

Anonymous said...

Will you listen to me as the rain beats down?
Will you smile at me as the the sun hits the ground?
Will you laugh at my jokes whatever they may be?
Will you remember my love for eternity?

Will you build me up as my world falls apart?
Will you understand these words came from the bottom of my heart?
Will you kiss me tenderly each and every day?
Will you tell me you love me, never with dismay?
Will you save me from evil, protect me from pain?
Will you show me happiness, and ill do the same?
Will you promise me that you will never let me go?
Will you show me a place we can always call home?

Will you stand by my grave when I am gone?
Will you lay down red roses, with a sweat peaceful song?
Will you have me in your heart and keep my love true and...
Will you please remember that I will always love you?

nituscorner said...

Sometimes tears can be intoxicating.....sometimes the captured spirits are not bounded by the chains.....and pain can give you the pleasure that no money can buy.....such is the power of "YOU"....!!!!
from all the poems that you wrote ...i liked this the best till date. Hope to read the best ones yet .

aishu said...

hey...thats a nice one!

Rohit Sharma said...

again sad poem avi :-(

Mehnaaz said...

beautifully penned down

Shweta Saxena said...

really liked dis, even though its on sad side & any1 sud try to avoid being sad but still well wrtitten

Pallavi said...

You carried the soul from my body
and yet you are still part of that soul;
you inflicted pain, but are still the remedy.


lovely compo

Radhika said...

nice one.....love ur poems

Ruchi said...

You destroyed the kingdom of my heart
with the sword of coquetry,
but are still its sovereign ruler

Lucky Princess Indeed!!

Richa Sharma said...

You carried the soul from my body
and yet you are still part of that soul;
you inflicted pain, but are still the remedy.

well composed

david santos said...

Nice poem. Brilliant.

Femin Susan said...

Beautifully poignant, and beautifully expressed poem

Ruchika Mittal said...

You destroyed the kingdom of my heart
with the sword of coquetry,
but are still its sovereign ruler

Sagarika said...

very intense...well composed

Anonymous said...

You destroyed the kingdom of my heart
with the sword of coquetry,
but are still its sovereign ruler.

Pretty Me!! said...

You carried the soul from my body
and yet you are still part of that soul;
you inflicted pain, but are still the remedy.


perfect !!

hitch writer said...

nicely done mate... !!

अल्पना वर्मा said...

A beautiful gift of words wrapped in soft emotions...

you have quite good hold on both english as well as hindi writings.

really impressive Avinash!

Aarti said...

best of all i have read on ur blog

Ria said...

You destroyed the kingdom of my heart
with the sword of coquetry,
but are still its sovereign ruler.

Dr. Gunjan Gehlot said...

You destroyed the kingdom of my heart
with the sword of coquetry,
but are still its sovereign ruler

Anonymous said...

You carried the soul from my body
and yet you are still part of that soul;
you inflicted pain, but are still the remedy.
EXCELLENT!

Alec said...

With one glance, my free wandering spirit
has been captured by you.

well written

Ani said...

that was lovely .. :)

thanks for stoppin by.. and u have a lovely blog.. :)

Anouska Awasthi said...

write something motivating...

Harkirat Haqeer said...

Avinash ji, hindi me bhi likhen....!!

Cursed♪♫ said...

You left me speechless !
Where do you get these ideas from ???? :O
Thanks for viewing my blog! :)
Happy Blogging!
P.S: Publish a book! It'll be good! I'll buy it first :)

•bLue-eyed sOuL• said...

ur blog is simply rocking!!

Trinaa said...

omg!!!! deep n intense n soooooo romantic! super! :))))0

Shilpi said...

You carried the soul from my body
and yet you are still part of that soul;
you inflicted pain, but are still the remedy

well composed

Parul said...

nicely expressed emotion attached wid love..love ur poems

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Hilda said...

It's beautiful but so painful too.

you have intoxicated me

you took my tears without glancing back


I think I'm too practical — if I knew someone who felt that way about an unfaithful or mean love, I'd probably just slap him ;)

Cursed♪♫ said...

Hey!! Glad you liked my poem :)
Thanks for following me!! :D
Come back again ! I'm waiting for your next post!

Tabitha said...

Nice One...Rare Stuff!!!

Tabitha said...

Nice One...Rare Stuff!!!

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Anita said...

You carried the soul from my body
and yet you are still part of that soul;
you inflicted pain, but are still the remedy.

Anita said...

well written...u write good, just explored both ur blog..both are very good
Keep it up!!

Er. Nidhi Mishra said...

You carried the soul from my body
and yet you are still part of that soul;
you inflicted pain, but are still the remedy.

too good

Zlaek said...

Still the remedy..... as we often say-- "You are my Weakness, You are my Strength"

Lovely words....and most so because I believe that the right words always have their source in true emotions...or in an unmatched experience gained over a long time.

janice_phil said...

wow!!! great poem!!! but then move on!! hehe!!!

swati said...

feelings personified..very well written..

meb said...

Brought tears as I remembered similar circumstances.

Memories are still good even if sad.

Radhika said...

You destroyed the kingdom of my heart
with the sword of coquetry,
but are still its sovereign ruler

Rupali said...

You carried the soul from my body
and yet you are still part of that soul;
you inflicted pain, but are still the remedy

last line says all

The Things We Carried said...

Your writing appears to leave others longing to add their own words to yours. Stunning.

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