She won't cry but...

Tuesday, March 10, 2009


Her head hung low,
her heart beat fast.
But when he walked out of the room,
She raised her head high.
Maybe she'll get over him,
Maybe she wont cry.

It's been a long time now,
People say she should move on,
But she just can't get over him.

They talk about the time,
When they shared all that love

But nobody understands,
Why she's still in love.

She falls to the ground,
And try's to get back up,
But the fear keeps pushing her down.
Will she ever escape the memory of his love?

Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can.

Dedicated to my best pal & her audacity, fortitude & valor. God bless her & my wishes come from the core of my heart.

162 comments:

Sneha said...

well written and beautifully Penn down.:)

Dr. Neha Srivastav said...

excellent...only u can write like dis

Er. Nidhi Mishra said...

She falls to the ground,
And try's to get back up,
But the fear keeps pushing her down.
Will she ever escape the memory of his love?

Er. Nidhi Mishra said...

that was very well penned down

Dr.Nishi Chauhan said...

that was very well written

Dr.Nishi Chauhan said...

Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.

Anonymous said...

It's been a long time now,
People say she should move on,
But she just can't get over him

Anonymous said...

that was outstanding sir

Puja said...

But nobody understands,
Why she's still in love.


brilliant work

aishu said...

But nobody understands,
Why she's still in love.

loved this line...!
you have a great writing skills...i couldn't help myself reading this poem more 2 times....great work!!

Anonymous said...

She falls to the ground,
And try's to get back up,
But the fear keeps pushing her down.
Will she ever escape the memory of his love?

Anonymous said...

well composed

Dr. Pragya bajaj said...

diificult to pen down her pain but u did ur best & result is good....

Prachi Pandey said...

They talk about the time,
When they shared all that love

But nobody understands,
Why she's still in love.

Prachi Pandey said...

that was absolute master piece

Anonymous said...

But when he walked out of the room,
She raised her head high.
Maybe she'll get over him,
Maybe she wont cry

Anonymous said...

She falls to the ground,
And try's to get back up,
But the fear keeps pushing her down.
Will she ever escape the memory of his love?

Anonymous said...

But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can

Anonymous said...

They talk about the time,
When they shared all that love

But nobody understands,
Why she's still in love.

Prachi Pandey said...

Maybe she'll get over him,
Maybe she wont cry.

It's been a long time now,
People say she should move on,

अल्पना वर्मा said...

this poem is too good Avinash!
Amazing!!!!!!!!!!
I am really fan of ur writing!

great!

आपको और आपके परिवार को होली की हार्दिक शुभकामनाये.

Dr. Palki Vajpayee said...

She falls to the ground,
And try's to get back up,
But the fear keeps pushing her down.
Will she ever escape the memory of his love?

Anonymous said...

excellent worrk...emotional dedication

Anonymous said...

She falls to the ground,
And try's to get back up,
But the fear keeps pushing her down.
Will she ever escape the memory of his love?

Cursed♪♫ said...

"Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,"
Can actually get the pricing feeling of what she must be going through!
lovely one! When's your book coming out?

•bLue-eyed sOuL• said...

wow!!loved it!!
its simply fabulous!!

gargi said...

wow.. those are some words!
a very nice dedication!
:)

Er. Snigddha Aggarwal said...

Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can

Brosreview said...

Very well expressed!!!

She, your best friend; I believe she will be fine as she has got supportive and understanding friends like you, Avinash.

She will definitely rise again.

Dr. Aradhna said...

beautifuly penned down...gr8 work

Anonymous said...

Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can.

Anonymous said...

excellent!!

विनय said...

होली के पावन त्योहार पर हार्दिक बधाई

Adisha said...

I read it and my heart contracted !! What an exceptional write up. I hope you're friend finds some strength in the fact that she's an Exceptional woman !!

Time heals all ... It never gets fades away, but certainly gets easier...

Cheers,
adisha

Pretty Me!! said...

Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can.



lovely lines .. Angels are my fav.. just love something about them too much !! the pic is really apt !!

Ashok said...

Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can.

Ashok said...

that was brilliant avi

Anonymous said...

She falls to the ground,
And try's to get back up,
But the fear keeps pushing her down.
Will she ever escape the memory of his love?

Anonymous said...

excellent work...

Anonymous said...

It's been a long time now,
People say she should move on,
But she just can't get over him

Anonymous said...

Allow for turnings, hems and seams
and bring to life the stuff of dreams
as slowly you watch the garment grow
beneath fingers that pin and tack and sew

Anonymous said...

well composed

Anonymous said...

Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can.

Austeen Sufi said...

well composed...Too good

Anonymous said...

nicely penned down

Anonymous said...

Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can.


Excellent

Mrs. Asha Joglekar said...

Beautiful, the fallen angel would rise for sure.

Alec said...

excellent composition

Dr.Ragini Rastogi said...

Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can.

Mehnaaz said...

u do write well...this was excellent!

Anonymous said...

Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can

Anonymous said...

beautifuly penned down

Anonymous said...

But nobody understands,
Why she's still in love

Anonymous said...

nicely composed

Anonymous said...

It's been a long time now,
People say she should move on,
But she just can't get over him

Anonymous said...

nicely writen

Anonymous said...

She falls to the ground,
And try's to get back up,
But the fear keeps pushing her down.
Will she ever escape the memory of his love?

Anonymous said...

excellent composition

Shweta Saxena said...

that was superior composition avi

Pallavi said...

She falls to the ground,
And try's to get back up,
But the fear keeps pushing her down.
Will she ever escape the memory of his love?

Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can.

Dr.Nishi Chauhan said...

Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can.

Anonymous said...

She falls to the ground,
And try's to get back up,
But the fear keeps pushing her down.
Will she ever escape the memory of his love?

Anonymous said...

They talk about the time,
When they shared all that love

But nobody understands,
Why she's still in love

nituscorner said...

Its always hard to mend a broken heart.....and the memories once written is always hard to erase.
touching avinash.
wishing you and your loved ones a very happy and peaceful holi. may the colours of holi fill up your life forever.

amatamari said...

I know only a little English
But I think a written
that smells of truth ...

thanks

Radhika said...

that was very nicely composed...touching n full of emotions

Patty said...

Beautiful poem.

Priya said...

Love is never permanent and its just the thoughts that holds her very deep in her mind and soul.

Ruchi said...

excellent work..love ur poems

Anita said...

wishing u very happy holi

Ritika Pandey said...

that was brilliant avinash ......

i am what i am said...

but nobody understands
why she's still in love!!!!
so so true. why do we love someone even when that person does not desrve even an iota of it???? its really not possible to understand why we love whom we love. we just love. avinash you write so beautifully. your rfriend is a lucky person to have you as a friend. i loved this poem to the bits. your compositions stir the heart, make me think, ponder, so true to life, so close to soul.
regards

Parul said...

very well composed

Rahul Viswanath said...

Bingoooooooo ...... Thatzzzzzz Lisaaaaaaaaa ........ On a serious note well composed !!! Happy Holi :)

Tulip Banerjee said...

excellent composition

Anonymous said...

Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can.
good one...

Shilpi said...

that was excellent piece of composition....

Trinaa said...

its d same story everywhere :(
hugzz to her .. :)

Indrani said...

Excellent piece... hope she gets over the past fast!
Happy Holi!!

joo said...

It's beautify, both poem and photo!

Ria said...

outstanding..love ur writings....happy holi

Tripti Pandey said...

Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can

Beautifuly writen

अविनाश said...
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अविनाश said...

@EVERY ONE READING THIS POEM

This poem is a regarding a lady who lost her dearly loved hubby few months back so no question of distrust or break up...its cruel life and its cruelty...she(my friend) is strong and has started taking life as it comes.....I salute her courage & determination..

She is still in love because love gets intense after the death of beloved & when you lose something, you realize what you really lost


Thanks to all of u for dropping down here....have a good time
Regards

Sagarika said...

excellent dedication......

Wishing u very happy holi

Dr.Ruchika Rastogi said...

that was very wel written...ur friend is lucky


Wishing u happy holi

Tripti said...

Thanks Avinash, that was really wonderful a wonderful surprise and thanks for the explaination. I am really lucky to have a friend like you.
Thanks you for all the good words and concern !!

Ruchika Mittal said...

that was lovely dedication..shows hw much u care 4 ur friends & all dear ones.....

Have a nice holi avi

Ritu said...

this is beautiful-emotional dedication......

Happy Holi

Er. Nidhi Mishra said...

good dat u explained ....

Shweta Saxena said...

this is excellent & emotional dedication...


Happy Holi

enchantinganki said...

aww..its lovely!
she's lucky to have a friend like u!!

Alec said...

good as always.....this time its outstanding

Deepak Barua said...

hi avinash, beautiful thoughts, wish you belated happy holi.
actually i have joined new hotel and its in preopening stage, so that why now a days iam not too frequent with blogs. sorry avi, but iam haapy that you are keep looking for my blogs, because ur the first one to comment.

Priya Mittal said...

Nice dedication....well composed

Amrita Kumari said...

Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can

nicely writen,

Amrita Kumari said...

so true true love never dies...emotional one

Radhika said...

nicely composed......

humanobserver said...

Nicely composed words :)

Abe said...

Thanks for your many visits to my blogs. They are always appreciated. I read your poem and liked it very much.

Netika Lumb said...

lovely.. Thanks for writing this. :)

Becky said...

Wow you have a great following here, I can see why.Im a new follower and I just got a tear in my eye over this one.Its so true you know."people always wonder why she still is in love"Great work!

Anouska Awasthi said...

nice emotional dedication.....

its better than ur sad musings

Anand said...

Hardly anything left for me to say..Uve got all the possible comments arready.

But I hv somethin' for u here..
Check this link ->

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Since u write neat, Id like to incude in my list of "Rocking Bloggers" in my 'slow but steadily coming up' blog .

Do let me know if you like the concept. I shall wait for ur nod.
Anand. :-)

Rupali said...

u do write well....nice one this too

Dr. Rupali Rastogi said...

Beautiful dedication....loved ur writings .....a big fan of urs now...
Keep posting.

mommanator said...

how beautiful- poetry & girl!

Meena said...

Awww,
sweet that you wrote that for her. The image is lovely BTW.

The Things We Carried said...

Beautiful work. The dedication deepens the beauty.

R. Ramesh said...

aviiii, how u doing??? thanks 4 staying in touch..cheers to your team..

humanobserver said...

Friend, came for new post. In between, I shot those aliens in Indraprashta Park new Sarai Kale Khan.

Som said...

The poem was great until the last line .. it did not fit in seamlessly ..

But still it is better than lot of stuff on the blogsphere .. keep em coming .. :)

Cursed♪♫ said...

Hi! Whats up? How are you? I'm waiting for your new post!

Femin Susan said...

beautiful penned down...gr8 work.......

Femin Susan said...

I like your poem - it has shape in the way you presented it.

R. Ramesh said...

avi boss where r u? missing u..cheers

KK Yadav said...

बहुत सुन्दर अभिव्यक्तियाँ...बधाई !!
______________________________
गणेश शंकर ‘विद्यार्थी‘ की पुण्य तिथि पर मेरा आलेख ''शब्द सृजन की ओर'' पर पढें - गणेश शंकर ‘विद्यार्थी’ का अद्भुत ‘प्रताप’ , और अपनी राय से अवगत कराएँ !!

nituscorner said...

hi avinash...
no new blogs for quite some time???? wats up ?? hope all fine.

R. Ramesh said...

aviiii,,,,where r uuuuuu???

अविनाश said...

hey guys,

Everything is fine, just was a bit busy with life, sorry to all for the delay.

Will keep you posted.Love to all !

Priyanka Khot said...

well written saga of unrequited love.

I am happily surprised to the flood of comments on ur blog. Keep it up!

Megha Chhatbar said...

This is really emotional...Beautifully crafted in words...:) BTW Avinash, I have started a new blog dedicated to my sketch work — Art on Sketchbook

अल्पना वर्मा said...

Hi Avinash,
Where are you??not seen these days?
you have not updated your blog for last 3 weeks.
Is everything all right at your end?

take care

R. Ramesh said...

no no, whatever reason.come back fast..this is not done pal..

Er. Nidhi Mishra said...

whatever the blog worldis empty widout u

Er. Paayal Sharma said...

hi hw are u avi....
long time no posts
hope to seeu soon
Love ya
Take care

Dr.Nishi Chauhan said...

howz u doin.....
no blogging??

Priya Mittal said...

long time no posts from you,i hopeallis wellon ur side
Take care

Priya Mittal said...

its been some time since i have seen any post from u,hope all well on ur side.......tke care
god bless ya

Mehnaaz said...

missing ur poem,fiction and ur captures
hope 2 seeu back soon
take care

Dr. Rupali Rastogi said...

read ur fiction other night, was wondering why dont u try 4 prof writing.....

missing ur writings

Parul said...

long time no see
hope all good on ur side
love ya
Take care

Sagarika said...

hi hw are you?
almost month now since any writing 4m u
hope u r doing well
Take care

Dr. Neha Srivastav said...

wassup?
hope u r doing well......
take care dear

Anita said...

hi hw r u?
long time no posts

Dr. Gunjan Gehlot said...

hi sir how are you?
wassup in life?
be in touch

Zen said...

Thats a beauty words....nice visiting your blog :)

Babli said...

बहुत बढिया!! इसी तरह से लिखते रहिए

Dr. Neeti said...

too gud avi all the best god bless u my dear friend

Anonymous said...

too gud avi ,keep it up all the best take care
neeti

Anonymous said...

Hi
kya bolo, padke ankhon mein payi aagaya dear. Too good.

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