She won't cry but...
Tuesday, March 10, 2009
Her head hung low,
her heart beat fast.
But when he walked out of the room,
She raised her head high.
Maybe she'll get over him,
Maybe she wont cry.
It's been a long time now,
People say she should move on,
But she just can't get over him.
They talk about the time,
When they shared all that love
But nobody understands,
Why she's still in love.
She falls to the ground,
And try's to get back up,
But the fear keeps pushing her down.
Will she ever escape the memory of his love?
Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can.
her heart beat fast.
But when he walked out of the room,
She raised her head high.
Maybe she'll get over him,
Maybe she wont cry.
It's been a long time now,
People say she should move on,
But she just can't get over him.
They talk about the time,
When they shared all that love
But nobody understands,
Why she's still in love.
She falls to the ground,
And try's to get back up,
But the fear keeps pushing her down.
Will she ever escape the memory of his love?
Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can.
Dedicated to my best pal & her audacity, fortitude & valor. God bless her & my wishes come from the core of my heart.
159 comments:
well written and beautifully Penn down.:)
excellent...only u can write like dis
She falls to the ground,
And try's to get back up,
But the fear keeps pushing her down.
Will she ever escape the memory of his love?
that was very well penned down
that was very well written
Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
It's been a long time now,
People say she should move on,
But she just can't get over him
that was outstanding sir
But nobody understands,
Why she's still in love.
brilliant work
But nobody understands,
Why she's still in love.
loved this line...!
you have a great writing skills...i couldn't help myself reading this poem more 2 times....great work!!
She falls to the ground,
And try's to get back up,
But the fear keeps pushing her down.
Will she ever escape the memory of his love?
well composed
diificult to pen down her pain but u did ur best & result is good....
They talk about the time,
When they shared all that love
But nobody understands,
Why she's still in love.
that was absolute master piece
But when he walked out of the room,
She raised her head high.
Maybe she'll get over him,
Maybe she wont cry
She falls to the ground,
And try's to get back up,
But the fear keeps pushing her down.
Will she ever escape the memory of his love?
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can
They talk about the time,
When they shared all that love
But nobody understands,
Why she's still in love.
Maybe she'll get over him,
Maybe she wont cry.
It's been a long time now,
People say she should move on,
this poem is too good Avinash!
Amazing!!!!!!!!!!
I am really fan of ur writing!
great!
आपको और आपके परिवार को होली की हार्दिक शुभकामनाये.
She falls to the ground,
And try's to get back up,
But the fear keeps pushing her down.
Will she ever escape the memory of his love?
brilliant avi....
excellent worrk...emotional dedication
She falls to the ground,
And try's to get back up,
But the fear keeps pushing her down.
Will she ever escape the memory of his love?
excellent work avi
"Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,"
Can actually get the pricing feeling of what she must be going through!
lovely one! When's your book coming out?
wow!!loved it!!
its simply fabulous!!
wow.. those are some words!
a very nice dedication!
:)
Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can
brilliant one avi
Very well expressed!!!
She, your best friend; I believe she will be fine as she has got supportive and understanding friends like you, Avinash.
She will definitely rise again.
beautifuly penned down...gr8 work
Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can.
excellent!!
होली के पावन त्योहार पर हार्दिक बधाई
I read it and my heart contracted !! What an exceptional write up. I hope you're friend finds some strength in the fact that she's an Exceptional woman !!
Time heals all ... It never gets fades away, but certainly gets easier...
Cheers,
adisha
Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can.
lovely lines .. Angels are my fav.. just love something about them too much !! the pic is really apt !!
Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can.
that was brilliant avi
just too good bozo
She falls to the ground,
And try's to get back up,
But the fear keeps pushing her down.
Will she ever escape the memory of his love?
excellent work...
It's been a long time now,
People say she should move on,
But she just can't get over him
Allow for turnings, hems and seams
and bring to life the stuff of dreams
as slowly you watch the garment grow
beneath fingers that pin and tack and sew
well composed
Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can.
well composed...Too good
nicely penned down
Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can.
Excellent
Beautiful, the fallen angel would rise for sure.
well composed
excellent composition
Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can.
too good
u do write well...this was excellent!
Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can
beautifuly penned down
But nobody understands,
Why she's still in love
nicely composed
It's been a long time now,
People say she should move on,
But she just can't get over him
nicely writen
She falls to the ground,
And try's to get back up,
But the fear keeps pushing her down.
Will she ever escape the memory of his love?
excellent composition
that was superior composition avi
She falls to the ground,
And try's to get back up,
But the fear keeps pushing her down.
Will she ever escape the memory of his love?
Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can.
lovely compo
Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can.
this was superb
She falls to the ground,
And try's to get back up,
But the fear keeps pushing her down.
Will she ever escape the memory of his love?
They talk about the time,
When they shared all that love
But nobody understands,
Why she's still in love
Its always hard to mend a broken heart.....and the memories once written is always hard to erase.
touching avinash.
wishing you and your loved ones a very happy and peaceful holi. may the colours of holi fill up your life forever.
I know only a little English
But I think a written
that smells of truth ...
thanks
that was very nicely composed...touching n full of emotions
Beautiful poem.
Love is never permanent and its just the thoughts that holds her very deep in her mind and soul.
excellent work..love ur poems
nicely composed
well composed
wishing u very happy holi
that was brilliant avinash ......
but nobody understands
why she's still in love!!!!
so so true. why do we love someone even when that person does not desrve even an iota of it???? its really not possible to understand why we love whom we love. we just love. avinash you write so beautifully. your rfriend is a lucky person to have you as a friend. i loved this poem to the bits. your compositions stir the heart, make me think, ponder, so true to life, so close to soul.
regards
very well composed
Bingoooooooo ...... Thatzzzzzz Lisaaaaaaaaa ........ On a serious note well composed !!! Happy Holi :)
nicely composed
wishing u happy holi
excellent composition
Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can.
good one...
that was excellent piece of composition....
its d same story everywhere :(
hugzz to her .. :)
Excellent piece... hope she gets over the past fast!
Happy Holi!!
It's beautify, both poem and photo!
excellently composed
outstanding..love ur writings....happy holi
Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can
Beautifuly writen
@EVERY ONE READING THIS POEM
This poem is a regarding a lady who lost her dearly loved hubby few months back so no question of distrust or break up...its cruel life and its cruelty...she(my friend) is strong and has started taking life as it comes.....I salute her courage & determination..
She is still in love because love gets intense after the death of beloved & when you lose something, you realize what you really lost
Thanks to all of u for dropping down here....have a good time
Regards
excellent dedication......
Wishing u very happy holi
that was very wel written...ur friend is lucky
Wishing u happy holi
Thanks Avinash, that was really wonderful a wonderful surprise and thanks for the explaination. I am really lucky to have a friend like you.
Thanks you for all the good words and concern !!
that was lovely dedication..shows hw much u care 4 ur friends & all dear ones.....
Have a nice holi avi
this is beautiful-emotional dedication......
Happy Holi
good dat u explained ....
this is excellent & emotional dedication...
Happy Holi
aww..its lovely!
she's lucky to have a friend like u!!
good as always.....this time its outstanding
hi avinash, beautiful thoughts, wish you belated happy holi.
actually i have joined new hotel and its in preopening stage, so that why now a days iam not too frequent with blogs. sorry avi, but iam haapy that you are keep looking for my blogs, because ur the first one to comment.
belated happy holi
Holi Mubarak!!
Nice dedication....well composed
Her wings are torn and tattered,
Her aura slipping low.
But they say one day she will rise again,
As only the Fallen Angel can
nicely writen,
so true true love never dies...emotional one
nicely composed......
Nicely composed words :)
Thanks for your many visits to my blogs. They are always appreciated. I read your poem and liked it very much.
lovely.. Thanks for writing this. :)
Wow you have a great following here, I can see why.Im a new follower and I just got a tear in my eye over this one.Its so true you know."people always wonder why she still is in love"Great work!
nice emotional dedication.....
its better than ur sad musings
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But I hv somethin' for u here..
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Since u write neat, Id like to incude in my list of "Rocking Bloggers" in my 'slow but steadily coming up' blog .
Do let me know if you like the concept. I shall wait for ur nod.
Anand. :-)
u do write well....nice one this too
Beautiful dedication....loved ur writings .....a big fan of urs now...
Keep posting.
how beautiful- poetry & girl!
Awww,
sweet that you wrote that for her. The image is lovely BTW.
Beautiful work. The dedication deepens the beauty.
aviiii, how u doing??? thanks 4 staying in touch..cheers to your team..
Friend, came for new post. In between, I shot those aliens in Indraprashta Park new Sarai Kale Khan.
The poem was great until the last line .. it did not fit in seamlessly ..
But still it is better than lot of stuff on the blogsphere .. keep em coming .. :)
Hi! Whats up? How are you? I'm waiting for your new post!
Outstanding.
beautiful penned down...gr8 work.......
I like your poem - it has shape in the way you presented it.
avi boss where r u? missing u..cheers
बहुत सुन्दर अभिव्यक्तियाँ...बधाई !!
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गणेश शंकर ‘विद्यार्थी‘ की पुण्य तिथि पर मेरा आलेख ''शब्द सृजन की ओर'' पर पढें - गणेश शंकर ‘विद्यार्थी’ का अद्भुत ‘प्रताप’ , और अपनी राय से अवगत कराएँ !!
hi avinash...
no new blogs for quite some time???? wats up ?? hope all fine.
aviiii,,,,where r uuuuuu???
hey guys,
Everything is fine, just was a bit busy with life, sorry to all for the delay.
Will keep you posted.Love to all !
well written saga of unrequited love.
I am happily surprised to the flood of comments on ur blog. Keep it up!
This is really emotional...Beautifully crafted in words...:) BTW Avinash, I have started a new blog dedicated to my sketch work — Art on Sketchbook
Hi Avinash,
Where are you??not seen these days?
you have not updated your blog for last 3 weeks.
Is everything all right at your end?
take care
no no, whatever reason.come back fast..this is not done pal..
whatever the blog worldis empty widout u
hi hw are u avi....
long time no posts
hope to seeu soon
Love ya
Take care
howz u doin.....
no blogging??
long time no posts from you,i hopeallis wellon ur side
Take care
its been some time since i have seen any post from u,hope all well on ur side.......tke care
god bless ya
missing ur poem,fiction and ur captures
hope 2 seeu back soon
take care
read ur fiction other night, was wondering why dont u try 4 prof writing.....
missing ur writings
long time no see
hope all good on ur side
love ya
Take care
hi hw are you?
almost month now since any writing 4m u
hope u r doing well
Take care
sab theek thak?
wassup?
hope u r doing well......
take care dear
where r u lost?
hi hw r u?
long time no posts
hi sir how are you?
wassup in life?
be in touch
Thats a beauty words....nice visiting your blog :)
बहुत बढिया!! इसी तरह से लिखते रहिए
too gud avi all the best god bless u my dear friend
too gud avi ,keep it up all the best take care
neeti
Hi
kya bolo, padke ankhon mein payi aagaya dear. Too good.
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