I Love You

Tuesday, April 14, 2009


I learned about love from you,
Watching your caring ways.
I learned about joy from you
In fun-filled yesterdays.

From you I learned forgiving
Of faults both big and small.
I learned what I know about living
From you, as you gave life your all.

The example you set is still with me
I'd never want any other.
I'm thankful for all that you taught me,
And I'm blessed to call you "Mother

Even though i can't see you
I know I am blessed by you
I do miss you
I love you my mom

107 comments:

Indrani said...

Beautiful lines and such a lovely shot!

Brosreview said...

This is touching!!! Keep it up!!!

PS: There is a typo -
"The example you set is still with meI
'd never want any other. I'm thankful for all that you taught me,
And I'm blessed to call you "Mother"

No offence.

Prachi Pandey said...

wat a beautiful composition

Dr. Palki Vajpayee said...

From you I learned forgiving
Of faults both big and small.
I learned what I know about living
From you, as you gave life your all.

David O. Brink said...

nice lines accompanied by lovely pic
nice 2 see u back

Anonymous said...

nicely composed

Anonymous said...

beautiful captures and lovely lines

humanobserver said...

Confused. Which one is the best poem or the image ?

Alec said...

nice shot, lovely lines both are exceptionally well

Anonymous said...

fantastic shot and nice lines

Anonymous said...

From you I learned forgiving
Of faults both big and small.
I learned what I know about living
From you, as you gave life your all.

Anonymous said...

beautifully written

Dr. Pragya bajaj said...

nice one
nice 2 see u back

Austeen Sufi said...

lovely one
God cant be evrywhere so he made mothers..so true

Dr. Aradhna said...

good shot and touching lines as always

Rohit Sharma said...

lovely shot...gr8 one...capture over took lines

Shweta Saxena said...

nicely composed..well expressed

Pallavi said...

From you I learned forgiving
Of faults both big and small.
I learned what I know about living
From you, as you gave life your all

Pallavi said...

beautiful & touching

Anonymous said...

From you I learned forgiving
Of faults both big and small.
I learned what I know about living
From you, as you gave life your all

Radhika said...

excellent click
lovely lines

Jyoti Dixit said...

mice lines accompanied by lovely pic

Ruchi said...

which is better pic or lines?
difficult 2 answer both are lovely

Ruchi said...

nice post & blog

Dr. Neha Srivastav said...

lovely avi
so back? ot break from a break?

Priyanka Khot said...

Really nice pic and the poem is beautiful!

Ashok said...

excellent click and lovely lines

joo said...

It's beautiful!

अल्पना वर्मा said...

very well expressed.very beautiful poem and also lovely picture.
माँ का प्यार होता ही ऐसा है ..माँ का प्यार होता ही ऐसा है ..कि कभी भुलाया नहीं जा सकता है.जीवन के हर मोड़ पर कभी सहारा देता है तो कभी सीख!

Janie at Sounding Forth said...

Precious.

I miss my Mom, too.

Tripti said...

Very nice as always, good to see you back.
Keep writing !!

विनय said...

बहुत सुन्दर कविता और गौरैया का चित्र भी!

amatamari said...

The love of a mother
is the future of the child

Thanks for your writing,
precious words...

freespaceofindia said...

totally speechless. keep it up!

Patricia Torres said...

oh lovely... I miss my mom!!

nituscorner said...

welcome back avinash....and a lovely piece here...so full of true feelings. g8.

magiceye said...

this is positively brilliant!

good to see you back in action!

Rahul Viswanath said...

Good to see you bounce back ! I love you Mom :)

aishu said...

wow so true...!!
these are the facts which is the most beautiful thing that we experience...well written! :)

Nirmla Kapila said...

even though i cant see you
Iknow Eam blessed by you
I do miss you
I love you my mom
very touching I salute your feelings

R. Ramesh said...

hey where did my comment vanish? anwy...gr8 to c u back avi...

jinksy said...

I love the poem and the picture! And remember, love continues even when the loved one is out of sight...

Adisha said...

awwww, so sweet ~~

cheers,
adisha

Jayant Chaudhary said...

Very beautiful..

I had written few lines on Maa too... These are dedicated to you now..

तुझ जैसे दुनिया में लाखों हैं,
तेरी माँ, पर लाखों में एक ही होगी...

जो तू ढूढ़ने निकलेगा,
कोई आत्मा, तेरी माँ जैसी नहीं होगी...

युग-युग और चिर-अन्तर तक
तेरी माँ, सदैव अद्वितीय ही होगी...
...................अद्वितीय ही होगी॥

~जयंत चौधरी

Jayant Chaudhary said...

Thanks for saluting Maa in a very touching way... Beautiful. I hope to read more of your creations in future.


~Jayant Chaudhary

Anonymous said...

The example you set is still with me
I'd never want any other.
I'm thankful for all that you taught me,
And I'm blessed to call you "Mother

lovely lines exraordinary pic

Shilpi said...

well composed, gr8 tribute

Tulip Banerjee said...

very well composed as always full of emotions, love & care

Dr. Gunjan Gehlot said...

very well written....love ya poetries

Anonymous said...

nice composition

Anonymous said...

shows ur emotions.....beautiful lines ...nicely penned down

Dr.Ragini Rastogi said...

From you I learned forgiving
Of faults both big and small.
I learned what I know about living
From you, as you gave life your all.

Ria said...

nicely composed

Ria said...

nice 2 see u back

Anonymous said...

nicel expressed thoughts..love ya writtings

Anonymous said...

The example you set is still with me
I'd never want any other.
I'm thankful for all that you taught me,

Sagarika said...

Excellent as always

Sagarika said...

did missed ur post..good 2 see here again

Anonymous said...

I learned about love from you,
Watching your caring ways.
I learned about joy from you
In fun-filled yesterdays.

Anonymous said...

well composed

Shweta Saxena said...

touching and full of emotions...nicely pened down as always

Anita said...

speech less...well writen

Anonymous said...

nice poem

Tripti Pandey said...

just love ur writings...this one is another good one from u

Ruchika Mittal said...

good to see ur writings again

Dr. Pragya bajaj said...

u made me cry ...well almost

Pretty Me!! said...

perfect !! apt dedication to anyone loving :)

swati said...

amazing write up!!loved it truely

Amrita Kumari said...

nicely penned down..emotional reading this......

love ur writings

Richa Sharma said...

gr8 2 see back with beautiful writing

Dr. Rupali Rastogi said...

what a heart touching lines...poignant

Dr. Rupali Rastogi said...

good 2 see u back..hope u dnt tek another break

Radhika said...

lovely composition....

Anonymous said...

nicely penned down

Anonymous said...

poignantly good

Anita said...

The example you set is still with me
I'd never want any other.
I'm thankful for all that you taught me,
And I'm blessed to call you "Mother

motivating......

Anita said...

truely maginificient presentation

Ritika Pandey said...

Even though i can't see you
I know I am blessed by you
I do miss you

R. Ramesh said...

avi bhaiyaa..gr8 2 c back active in blogland..u r such an inspiration and important to people like us..btw, that 200 million blog number i got from sunday times london cover report..they had mentioned the number..mindboggling, right?

Babli said...

मुझे आपका ब्लोग बहुत अच्छा लगा ! आप बहुत ही सुन्दर लिखते है ! मेरे ब्लोग मे आपका स्वागत है !

namaki said...

E beautiful poem with a very touching picture ! nice, very nice !

kavita said...

it touched my heart....in your lines i see a lot of love ,admiration and pain too...she lives in you.....MA KO APNE DIL MEIN HAMESHA ISE TARAH SAHEJ KE RAKHIYE.

muthu said...

lovely poem....

loved esp...

she wont cry but....

you should try this 55 fiction... in a way it's about women...

http://average-everyday.blogspot.com/2009/04/short-stories-55-fiction.html

मुनीश ( munish ) said...

amazing fan following yaar ! am gettin' green with envy . wow!! mindblowing company here! i resent my days spent in Hindi blogging . o vaat a sheer waste it has been ! y didn't i come here earlier!

Neelima said...

maawa tandiya chawa............. mai maa ko bahut pyar karti hu par aaj talak apne dil ki bat nhi kah pai ......mai bhi maa hu ab ............par aapne meri aankho mai aansu la diye ... hats off to you

Femin Susan said...

Your words still echo in my ears. nice shot, lovely lines both are exceptionally well.

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Anonymous said...

I Learned From You

I learned about love from you,
Watching your caring ways.
I learned about joy from you
In fun-filled yesterdays.
From you I learned forgiving
Of faults both big and small.
I learned what I know about living
From you, as you gave life your all.
The example you set is still with me
I'd never want any other.
I'm thankful for all that you taught me,
And I'm blessed to call you "Mother."


By Joanna Fuchs
original poem is something like that...dont take others credit.......

thepoetryman said...

अविनाश,
Loved it.

Peace...

MUFLIS said...

nice clicks.....
lovely...and lively

---MUFLIS---

R. Ramesh said...

where r u friend? missing u and team badly..

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