Can't u come back Mom?
Wednesday, February 25, 2009
Mom, I miss you so very much
On every night & Day;
& not just then, but every moment,
Since you went away.
You were the center of my life
before your soul passed on;
it’s just so hard for me to believe,
that you are really gone.
My wonderful memories, Mom, of you
are the things that will comfort & save me
I look up at you, sweet Mom,
as you look at me from above .
Now, since I lost my way ,
& it's darkness all the way ;
As I feel abandoned & orphaned ,
Can’t you come back?
& show me the way ,
As I woke up scared ,
Come & hold me close to you;
So many things to be shared ,
All I need is you .
Can’t you come back?
92 comments:
wordless on dis
i knw u r very brave, its just dat some time v feel alone and abadoned but never use dat word vich u used 4 urself....
Take Care
cant say much on dis other than
Take care
A very touching tribute to your love for your mother, it's really lovely. Well done.
vey fiting tribute 2 ur mom....
very well expressed emotion, love n need....
tek care
nicely written and expressed, u knw she is still wid u, mite nt physically nut her blessings n love still with u
Take care
that was reallyy well expressed love 4 ur mom vich at times is very difficult 2 express in words
As I woke up scared ,
Come & hold me close to you;
So many things to be shared ,
All I need is you
very toching lines
Now, since I lost my way ,
& it's darkness all the way ;
u arent alone
very well written.....
A mother is the truest friend we have, when trials heavy and sudden, fall upon us; when adversity takes the place of prosperity; when friends who rejoice with us in our sunshine desert us; when trouble thickens around us, still will she cling to us, and endeavor by her kind precepts and counsels to dissipate the clouds of darkness, and cause peace to return to our hearts
No painter's brush, nor poet's pen
In justice to her fame
Has ever reached half high enough
To write a mother's name
u wrote well
Because I feel that in the heavens above
The angels, whispering one to another,
Can find among their burning tears of love,
None so devotional as that of "Mother,"
Therefore, by that dear name I have long called you,
You who are more than mother unto me.
No painter's brush, nor poet's pen
In justice to her fame
Has ever reached half high enough
To write a mother's name.
thts a touchy dedication for ur mom..
lovely..
thanks for visiting my blog.. hope to keep seein u there more often.. :)
Thou art thy mother's glass, and she in thee
Calls back the lovely April of her prime.
u wrote very well.....
A mother is a person who seeing there are only four pieces of pie for five people, promptly announces she never did care for pie
Miss my mom ..... been away from home for last 5 yrs ..... :(
What a lovely poem, but so sad. Was this written about your Mother?
Hey.. Everything is gonna be fine dear.. Your mom is watching you from above.. Like god shekeeps watch on you and takes care of you.. Dont worry.. Take care..
Heartbreaking for this mama to read. I heard once that we all become orphans when our parents die. It seems it is true for our hearts.
heartful tribute 2 ur mom....take care
wonderful poem... i loved it :)
and thanks...dont ask why i am thanking you though :)
My mother whose eyes were strained
By a sadness that stained her eyes
With grey and blue hue
My mother who never blew
Out candles on a birthday cake
My mother who never knew
The thrills of flying in an airplane
My mother who forever threw
Her pearls to swine
My mother who knew
No contentment in living
My who mother never lived
To be even seventy two
My mother who it is true
Stopped living long before she died
My mother from whose mouth flew
Words of disappointment and fury
My mother whose lips
Tasted bitter tears
My mother sat impatiently
In sorrow through her years
My mother who like Kunta Kinte
Was tamed by Diabets
My mother who was tamed
By my father
Loved ur tribute
MOTHER, YOU ARE ONLY MOTHER
Mother, you are only mother,
because of you,
i got thoughts and rituals,
because of you,
i got my face, my existence and my prestige,
mother, you are neither goddess nor god,
mother, you are not away from these,
mother, you are my soul,
you are within me,
mother, you aren`t a materialistic thing,
you are omnipresent earth,
you are a firm foundation,
mother, you are away from words,
mother, you are life
Dr. Rachna sharma
Mother, Oh Mother Dear
One should be so blessed
To have a loving mother,
Always giving her best,
Bonded to each other.
Mother, oh mother dear
You were there everyday,
Always so very sincere,
Teaching me to pray.
Mother, oh mother dear
As laughter filled the air,
You taught me to play,
And to always be fair.
Then came the day
God called your name,
Now in heaven you stay,
Burning your eternal flame.
Mother, oh mother dear
I miss you so much,
As on my cheek I feel a tear,
And I hunger for your touch.
Mother, oh mother dear
You listened to my prayers,
you gave me back my cheer,
And wiped away my tears.
Mother, oh mother dear
You blessed me with Bobby,
He takes away my fear,
And always has heart.
Bobby I'm blessed by your love
That I pray I'm worthy of,
Your my blessing from above,
Mother, oh mother dear.
Carol Amaro
Loved urs, here mine
MOTHER IS GREAT
Mother is creator of life,
mother is hapiness of insight,
mother is stream of the Ganges,
mother is language of love,
mother is the teacher of rituals,
mother is the soul of God,
mother, thou are great
Sambhavi
take care avi
Now, since I lost my way ,
& it's darkness all the way
:) .. this is neat!
beautiful ode to 'mom'
There is a saying that "God could not be everywhere, and therefore he made mothers."
But I wonder that if its true then why he always takes back mothers from many people.
And since he does that all i will say again"I don’t know if God exists, but it would be better for His reputation if He didn’t."
emotional .....I remember my mother's prayers and they have always followed me. They have clung to me all my life
nice tribute 2 ur mom........
An ounce of mother is worth a pound of clergy
Mother love is the fuel that enables a normal human being to do the impossible
A mother is the truest friend we have, when trials heavy and sudden, fall upon us; when adversity takes the place of prosperity; when friends who rejoice with us in our sunshine desert us; when trouble thickens around us, still will she cling to us, and endeavor by her kind precepts and counsels to dissipate the clouds of darkness, and cause peace to return to our hearts
Touching lines!
well composed n expresse love, care n need
very touching composition
Mother's love is peace. It need not be acquired, it need not be deserved
No one in the world can take the place of your mother. Right or wrong, from her viewpoint you are always right. She may scold you for little things, but never for the big ones
My mother had a great deal of trouble with me, but I think she enjoyed it
poem wid lots of feeling
liked the way emotions are expressed which r often dificult 2 do
good tribute, well writen
that touched heart n soul
A mother is the truest friend we have, when trials heavy and sudden, fall upon us; when adversity takes the place of prosperity; when friends who rejoice with us in our sunshine desert us; when trouble thickens around us, still will she cling to us, and endeavor by her kind precepts and counsels to dissipate the clouds of darkness, and cause peace to return to our hearts.
And so our mothers and grandmothers have, more often than not anonymously, handed on the creative spark, the seed of the flower they themselves never hoped to see -- or like a sealed letter they could not plainly read.
-- Alice Walker
Grown don't mean nothing to a mother. A child is a child. They get bigger, older, but grown? What's that suppose to mean? In my heart it don't mean a thing.
well composed n expressed..........
u reminded me of my maa
speechless on this....
nice tribute....
well expressed thoughts, emotion n feelings..difficult 4 most
very touching lines
nice one, loved the way u xpressed it, god bless ya take care
touching!
nice one..very emotional tribute
i am sure u made so many ppl remeber their mom by this poem...including me.....
very well writen n expressed......
mother's love for her child is like nothing else in the world.
It knows no law, no pity,
it dares all things and crushes down remorselessly all that stands in its path
u wrote it very well...
A great piece Avinash....I find your poems are very soul touching and intense. looking forward for more.
such a touching tribute, very well composed
speechless!!!!!
emotional read
we all need mom no matter at wat stage of life v r...she is always wid u.......
God bless take care
ineed intense
well composed...god bless
very well composed.
can't say much about thish
may god bless you
cheers :)
speechless!!
speechless you leave me indeed... i also loved the few poems scattered in the commetn section :) many thanks for this write !!
Amazing! Can make someone weep!
Keep up your good work!
Mind blowing blog!
Wonderful !!! Mother, the one word that holds all of eternity in itself, and without it we are all alone ...
Cheers,
adisha
Very Beautiful ... amazing ... It surely is one of the best on your blog ...
Beautifully said. It's so heartfelt.
Just too good...
touching words..
[picture of a sleeping baby in the side bar complimenting it.]
aww.. really feel for u..
but then i wouldnt think she would like to hear u call urself orphaned.. am sure she's around u all the time.. like ur guardian angel..
tht was a lovely tribute.. :)
Feelings pour out of this quite well!!! Good job!!!
Very touching. We miss her more when she is gone for ever.
very well writen
hey, you have a great blog, keep it up!
and thanks for all your encouraging comments :)
A great one indeed.
well writen,
poignantly beautiful
poignant
Awesome!When a tear runs down my cheek it truly touches a place in my heart.
beautiful line full of love, emotions , care....
well i cant stop my tears after reading this take care jst want to talk to u
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