Free from the bonds of the two worlds

Monday, February 23, 2009

May your charming face ever shine like the full moon;
May you hold eternal sways over the domains of beauty.
By your amorous glance you have killed a poor man like me;
How magnanimous of you? May God give you a long life

Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.

By your wanton playfulness you must have destroyed

Thousands of hearts of lovers like that of mine

95 comments:

Dr. Neha Srivastav said...

By your amorous glance you have killed a poor man like me;
How magnanimous of you? May God give you a long life

good one

Riya said...

Great work.. Amazingly well written..

Riya said...

Loved each and every line.. Really.. You write well..

Prachi Pandey said...

May your charming face ever shine like the full moon;
May you hold eternal sways over the domains of beauty.
By your amorous glance you have killed a poor man like me;
How magnanimous of you? May God give you a long life

well comosed

Anonymous said...

Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while

Anonymous said...

By your wanton playfulness you must have destroyed
Thousands of hearts of lovers like that of mine

well written

Puja said...

that was really nice avinash..loved it

Puja said...

Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.

Anonymous said...

By your amorous glance you have killed a poor man like me;
How magnanimous of you? May God give you a long life

Anonymous said...

love, pain, hate & care all in one poem, excellent composition

Anonymous said...

By your amorous glance you have killed a poor man like me;
How magnanimous of you? May God give you a long life

Anonymous said...

I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.

Anonymous said...

Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment

Anonymous said...

By your wanton playfulness you must have destroyed
Thousands of hearts of lovers like that of mine

Er. Snigddha Aggarwal said...

By your amorous glance you have killed a poor man like me;
How magnanimous of you? May God give you a long life

philosohica....well written

Anonymous said...

Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.

Dr. Palki Vajpayee said...

Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.

Anonymous said...

Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.

Anonymous said...

Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while

Anonymous said...

beautiful

Anonymous said...

May your charming face ever shine like the full moon;
May you hold eternal sways over the domains of beauty

Anonymous said...

well composed

Anonymous said...

By your amorous glance you have killed a poor man like me;
How magnanimous of you? May God give you a long life

Anonymous said...

shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.

Anonymous said...

nice one sir

Dr.Nishi Chauhan said...

Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.


PHILOSOPHICAL

Dr.Nishi Chauhan said...

GOOD ONE AVINASH LOVE THIS POEM

Dr. Aradhna said...

philosophical, u have been writting very well, cant say keep it up but write some thing motivational
Take care

Dr. Gunjan Gehlot said...

vrey good one, like ur poetries

Dr.Ragini Rastogi said...

Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.

Tripti Pandey said...

Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.

nice one, liked it a lot
well composed

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Shweta Saxena said...

Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while

Ruchika Mittal said...

that was really well composed loved the way u expressed

Amrita Kumari said...

I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while

Anonymous said...

Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.

Anonymous said...

By your amorous glance you have killed a poor man like me;
How magnanimous of you? May God give you a long life

Anonymous said...

By your wanton playfulness you must have destroyed
Thousands of hearts of lovers like that of mine

Anonymous said...

Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while

Shilpi said...

nice one, very well composed avinash

R. Ramesh said...

hii.forgive my ignorance and temme how to remove this lettr confirmation on comments plz

Ritika Pandey said...

excellent poem.....very well composed..hope all well on ur side
Tek care

Pretty Me!! said...

nice one ... i liked that the long lines did not break the poem's flow !

Austeen Sufi said...

Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.

Sagarika said...

Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.

Sagarika said...

that was really nice, very well composed

Anonymous said...

By your amorous glance you have killed a poor man like me;
How magnanimous of you? May God give you a long life

Anonymous said...

Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.

Anonymous said...

Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while

Anonymous said...

By your amorous glance you have killed a poor man like me;
How magnanimous of you? May God give you a long life

Anonymous said...

shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.

David O. Brink said...

nicely expressed the love, pain and hate (I guess)

Alec said...

Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.

too good man

Dr. Aradhna said...

well written, well exprssed

Just try 2 use lesser words

Rahul Viswanath said...

May Lord give you long life as well अविनाश !!! Nice one :)

i am what i am said...

hi avinash. thank you so so much for the award. there is a small problem though. can you please teel me how to put it on my blog??? i'm a little dumb that way. and i'm waiting for your comments on my post individuality.

Dr. Palki Vajpayee said...

shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.

Aarti said...

very nicely composed..loved it

Ria said...

can feel the pain inside u..well written avi

Tulip Banerjee said...

Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment
philosophical..

Abe Lincoln said...

You have so many comments. I wish your friends would come and look. LOL

Anyway, the plant the golden bird was on is a tree. The tree grows tall and is called a Blue Spruce. It looks blue or the needles are blue.

Thanks for visiting Abraham Lincoln. My cousin was President Lincoln.

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Ruchi said...

very well written

Jyoti Dixit said...

Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.
Too good, u do write well

Pallavi said...

By your amorous glance you have killed a poor man like me;
How magnanimous of you? May God give you a long life

nice one, very well expressed

Priya Mittal said...

well composed...can feel it

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Shreya Rajput said...

I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.

nicely expressed

nituscorner said...

Nice poem avinash....felt very nostalgic ...!!!!

Swati said...

Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.


really well composed

Ani said...

intersting thoughts..

Som said...

It reminded me of an Elvis Costtelo song;

She can Kill with a smile, she can wound with her eyes, she can ruin your faith with her casual smile ...

Brosreview said...

Very well written!!! I am following your intelligent blog from now on. I hope you shall visit mine as well. Thank you in advance.

Brosreview said...

Slightly prose-like, innit? Mind you, that's not bad. I write in a similar style myself. Good job!!!

Anita said...

Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment

Rupali said...

this one is best by u

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