Free from the bonds of the two worlds
Monday, February 23, 2009
May your charming face ever shine like the full moon;
May you hold eternal sways over the domains of beauty.
By your amorous glance you have killed a poor man like me;
How magnanimous of you? May God give you a long life
Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.
By your wanton playfulness you must have destroyed
Thousands of hearts of lovers like that of mine
89 comments:
By your amorous glance you have killed a poor man like me;
How magnanimous of you? May God give you a long life
good one
philosophical..loved it
Great work.. Amazingly well written..
Loved each and every line.. Really.. You write well..
well composed
poignant
May your charming face ever shine like the full moon;
May you hold eternal sways over the domains of beauty.
By your amorous glance you have killed a poor man like me;
How magnanimous of you? May God give you a long life
well comosed
Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while
By your wanton playfulness you must have destroyed
Thousands of hearts of lovers like that of mine
well written
that was really nice avinash..loved it
Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.
By your amorous glance you have killed a poor man like me;
How magnanimous of you? May God give you a long life
love, pain, hate & care all in one poem, excellent composition
By your amorous glance you have killed a poor man like me;
How magnanimous of you? May God give you a long life
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.
Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment
very well composed
By your wanton playfulness you must have destroyed
Thousands of hearts of lovers like that of mine
By your amorous glance you have killed a poor man like me;
How magnanimous of you? May God give you a long life
philosohica....well written
Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.
well composed
Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.
that was too good
Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while
May your charming face ever shine like the full moon;
May you hold eternal sways over the domains of beauty
well composed
By your amorous glance you have killed a poor man like me;
How magnanimous of you? May God give you a long life
shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.
nice one sir
Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.
PHILOSOPHICAL
GOOD ONE AVINASH LOVE THIS POEM
philosophical, u have been writting very well, cant say keep it up but write some thing motivational
Take care
vrey good one, like ur poetries
Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.
nice one, liked it a lot
well composed
good composition...
A very thoughtful blog, I came here from Tripti, I will follow and see where you lead me.
AV
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Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while
again good one
that was really well composed loved the way u expressed
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while
good one
Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.
By your amorous glance you have killed a poor man like me;
How magnanimous of you? May God give you a long life
By your wanton playfulness you must have destroyed
Thousands of hearts of lovers like that of mine
Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while
nice one, very well composed avinash
hii.forgive my ignorance and temme how to remove this lettr confirmation on comments plz
excellent poem.....very well composed..hope all well on ur side
Tek care
Nice:)
nice one ... i liked that the long lines did not break the poem's flow !
Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.
well composed
Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.
that was really nice, very well composed
By your amorous glance you have killed a poor man like me;
How magnanimous of you? May God give you a long life
Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while
By your amorous glance you have killed a poor man like me;
How magnanimous of you? May God give you a long life
shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.
nicely expressed the love, pain and hate (I guess)
Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.
too good man
well written, well exprssed
Just try 2 use lesser words
May Lord give you long life as well अविनाश !!! Nice one :)
Beautiful lines!
hi avinash. thank you so so much for the award. there is a small problem though. can you please teel me how to put it on my blog??? i'm a little dumb that way. and i'm waiting for your comments on my post individuality.
aah....love!
shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.
very nicely composed..loved it
can feel the pain inside u..well written avi
Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment
philosophical..
You have so many comments. I wish your friends would come and look. LOL
Anyway, the plant the golden bird was on is a tree. The tree grows tall and is called a Blue Spruce. It looks blue or the needles are blue.
Thanks for visiting Abraham Lincoln. My cousin was President Lincoln.
Brookville Ohio
well composed
Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.
Too good, u do write well
By your amorous glance you have killed a poor man like me;
How magnanimous of you? May God give you a long life
nice one, very well expressed
Stunning.
get rid of sad poems...
well composed...can feel it
you have beed tagged!!!!! please visit the blog for details
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.
nicely expressed
Nice poem avinash....felt very nostalgic ...!!!!
Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment.
I shall be set free from the bonds of the two worlds
if you become my companion for a while.
really well composed
intersting thoughts..
It reminded me of an Elvis Costtelo song;
She can Kill with a smile, she can wound with her eyes, she can ruin your faith with her casual smile ...
Very well written!!! I am following your intelligent blog from now on. I hope you shall visit mine as well. Thank you in advance.
Slightly prose-like, innit? Mind you, that's not bad. I write in a similar style myself. Good job!!!
Pray do not be cruel lest you should feel ashamed of yourself
before your lovers on the Day of Judgment
this one is best by u
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