You don't deserve my tears
Thursday, January 22, 2009
For eight months I have waited
And held all my tears
But last night I let them flow
I never again wanted to cry for you
Because of what you did
You don't deserve my tears
Because of what you did
I Gave up
I find no hope in humanity
Because of what you did
I see no love in a heart
I look for the corruption
Because of what you did
I no longer care
I try not to feel
I try not to cry
You don't deserve my tears
Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do
All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
112 comments:
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
Thats Love avinash......
very well written as always
Take care.
oye aise poem likhega to avinash pandey se avinash Udaas ho jayega....stop all these.....
move on fatso...
A teardrop is insignificant in a pool of water, but it can touch the soul as it runs down someone’s face.
Move forward !!
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
very well written...
Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do
that was too good
I find no hope in humanity
Because of what you did
I see no love in a heart
I look for the corruption
Because of what you did
nice one avi dont cry 4 those who dont cry 4 u
Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do
that was touching lines sir
Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do
u write so well keep it going
All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me
nicely written n love's dilemna is xpressed n last 2 lines
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do
gr8 writing skills
All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me
too good
Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do
WELL COMPOSED
All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me
nicely composed
Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do
Very well written.. gud poem.. it conveys so much in so very few words.. kudos...!!
Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do
very well composed
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
Love's Dilemna
Very nice creation to read and touching one too!
well written...
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
thats love u dont cry to get anything u cry 4 ur love...thats true love
Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do
well written
Regards
Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you .
U have a deep eyes and also a deep writting power to explain what u think , really superb....great..great....
I love ur style....
Regards..
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
lovely composition
You don't deserve my tears...........A santence which is the soul of this poem......well written...keep rocking...
arsh
मान गये अविनाशजी आप तो बहुमुखी प्रतिभा के धनी है. क्या खूब लिकते है आप, आत्मा तक दहल उठती है. हम आपकी प्रतिभा के कायल हो गये.
धन्यवाद
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
nice write !
a touching one ,
has the ability to make anybody feel moved ,
AND YES ! tell Rohit (must be very close to you) that you are not udaas, but won`t stop writing f
such truism.
CONGRATS .
---MUFLIS---
Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
nicely composed...EK DUM DIL SE
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
well written
Regards
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
good one
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
U write straight from ur heart thats best part
Take care.
What a beautiful but sad poem. Thanks for sharing. I hope this isn't someone you loved that broke your heart.
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
simply superb poem
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
This ultimately says it all. Nice and very honest flow of emotions.
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
well written
waah kya baat hai
too good man
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
That was really nice
Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
too good
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
nicely written
Regards
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do
good composition
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
Last 2 lines are Heart & Soul of poem
very nicely written
Regards
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
last too lines r 2 good
Regards
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
right from heart
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
great!
as usual very well written..good one..
good blog yaar
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Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do
All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me
WELL COMPOSED
8 months was indeed long..She surely didnt deserve ...
All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
last 2 lines r too good
Regards
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
too good
Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do
All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me
Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do
All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
last two lines are too good
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
Last2 lines are 2 good
All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
Excellent...she surely didnt deserved ur love
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
Nice one
Regards
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
last 2 lines r 2 good
Regards
All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
excellent poem
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
well written bhai
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
too good
All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me
well composed
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
that feelings well exprssed
All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me
this is wow :)
All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me
loved these lines... too good ...
Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
that was unique way of expressing love
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