You don't deserve my tears

Thursday, January 22, 2009


For eight months I have waited
And held all my tears
But last night I let them flow
I never again wanted to cry for you
Because of what you did
You don't deserve my tears

Because of what you did
I Gave up
I find no hope in humanity
Because of what you did
I see no love in a heart
I look for the corruption
Because of what you did
I no longer care
I try not to feel
I try not to cry
You don't deserve my tears

Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do

All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

114 comments:

Er. Paayal Sharma said...

You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
Thats Love avinash......
very well written as always
Take care.

Rohit Sharma said...

oye aise poem likhega to avinash pandey se avinash Udaas ho jayega....stop all these.....
move on fatso...

tripti said...

A teardrop is insignificant in a pool of water, but it can touch the soul as it runs down someone’s face.

Move forward !!

अनु मिश्रा said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Anonymous said...

Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do

Anonymous said...

that was too good

Ashok said...

I find no hope in humanity
Because of what you did
I see no love in a heart
I look for the corruption
Because of what you did

Ashok said...

nice one avi dont cry 4 those who dont cry 4 u

अविनाश said...
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Anonymous said...

Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do

Anonymous said...

that was touching lines sir

Tulip Banerjee said...

Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do

Tulip Banerjee said...

u write so well keep it going

Ria said...

All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me
nicely written n love's dilemna is xpressed n last 2 lines

You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Dr.Nishi Chauhan said...

Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do

Er. Nidhi Mishra said...

All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me

Dr. Pragya bajaj said...

Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do
WELL COMPOSED

Dr. Palki Vajpayee said...

All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me

Anonymous said...

Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do

Riya said...

Very well written.. gud poem.. it conveys so much in so very few words.. kudos...!!

Tracy said...

Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do

Tracy said...

very well composed

Prachi Pandey said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
Love's Dilemna

jayaka said...

Very nice creation to read and touching one too!

Anonymous said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Anonymous said...

Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do

Dr. Neha Srivastav said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Dr. Neha Srivastav said...

thats love u dont cry to get anything u cry 4 ur love...thats true love

Anonymous said...

Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do

Anonymous said...

well written
Regards

Anonymous said...

Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do

Dev said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you .


U have a deep eyes and also a deep writting power to explain what u think , really superb....great..great....

I love ur style....

Regards..

Dr. Aradhna Awasthi said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
lovely composition

"अर्श" said...

You don't deserve my tears...........A santence which is the soul of this poem......well written...keep rocking...


arsh

अनु मिश्रा said...

मान गये अविनाशजी आप तो बहुमुखी प्रतिभा के धनी है. क्या खूब लिकते है आप, आत्मा तक दहल उठती है. हम आपकी प्रतिभा के कायल हो गये.
धन्यवाद

Anonymous said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

MUFLIS said...

nice write !
a touching one ,
has the ability to make anybody feel moved ,
AND YES ! tell Rohit (must be very close to you) that you are not udaas, but won`t stop writing f
such truism.
CONGRATS .
---MUFLIS---

Anonymous said...

Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do

Puja said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
nicely composed...EK DUM DIL SE

Anouska Awasthi said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Anonymous said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
good one

Er. Snigddha Aggarwal said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
U write straight from ur heart thats best part
Take care.

Old Lady Lincoln said...

What a beautiful but sad poem. Thanks for sharing. I hope this isn't someone you loved that broke your heart.

अविनाश said...
This comment has been removed by the author.
Anonymous said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
simply superb poem

[Ragini]. said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

This ultimately says it all. Nice and very honest flow of emotions.

Ria Taneja said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
well written

Ritu said...

waah kya baat hai
too good man

Anonymous said...

You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Anonymous said...

All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me

Shreya Rajput said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
That was really nice

Priya Talwar said...

Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do

Priya Talwar said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Swati said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Anonymous said...

All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
nicely written
Regards

Anonymous said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Ria Taneja said...

Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do
good composition

Mehnaaz said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
Last 2 lines are Heart & Soul of poem
very nicely written
Regards

Anonymous said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
last too lines r 2 good
Regards

Alec said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Alec said...

right from heart

Anonymous said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Rashmi said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Rashmi said...

very well written

Anonymous said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Amit said...

as usual very well written..good one..

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Anonymous said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Ritu said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Dr. Pragya bajaj said...

Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do

Anonymous said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Anonymous said...

Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do

All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me
WELL COMPOSED

"My macrocosm" said...

8 months was indeed long..She surely didnt deserve ...

Anonymous said...

All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me

Shalini Chopra said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Shalini Chopra said...

last 2 lines r too good
Regards

Anonymous said...

You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
too good

Anonymous said...

Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do

All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me

Anonymous said...

Because of what you did
I lost the only thing that made me happy
You were what got me through each day
But because of what you did
I don't know what to do

All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me

अविनाश said...
This comment has been removed by the author.
Anonymous said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Dr. Aradhna Awasthi said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Dr. Aradhna Awasthi said...

last two lines are too good

Preeti said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
Last2 lines are 2 good

Preeti said...

All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
Excellent...she surely didnt deserved ur love

Jyoti Dixit said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
Nice one
Regards

Austeen Sufi said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Austeen Sufi said...

last 2 lines r 2 good
Regards

Anonymous said...

All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Dr. Aradhna said...

All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Richa Saxena said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Shilpi Verma said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Anonymous said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Ritika Pandey said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
well written bhai

Amrita Kumari said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Ruchika Mittal said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

Dr. Gunjan Gehlot said...

You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you
too good

Dr.Ruchika Rastogi said...

All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me

Trisha Pandey said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

that feelings well exprssed

Pretty Me!! said...

All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me



this is wow :)

Pretty Me!! said...

All that is left is tears
Tears that have been waiting to fall
Waiting for me to break
Waiting for me to admit
That I miss your love
But you don't deserve me

loved these lines... too good ...

David O. Brink said...

Because of what you did
I am now lost
Alone without you or anybody else
You don't deserve my tears
But I still cry for you

David O. Brink said...

that was unique way of expressing love

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