Remember a time

Wednesday, January 7, 2009

There was a time when I needed you desperately.
Because I was so alone, and you were the only one who could reach me.

There was a time when I felt I could face any challenge
Because you were there with me.

Now I see that you need someone you can get close to
Who won't fall apart if you need to go.

I remember a time, not so long ago, when I felt afraid
To be apart from you.

I worried that if you left,
I'd find nobody else.

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.

66 comments:

Anouska Awasthi said...

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.
nice lines...
take care

Er. Nidhi Mishra said...

Now I see that you need someone you can get close to
Who won't fall apart if you need to go.

I remember a time, not so long ago, when I felt afraid
To be apart from you.
WELL WRITTEN

Amit said...

well said as well as well composed..

Shreya Rajput said...

Whatever it may bring….

He asked some unanswerable mysteries so strange..
Unknowingly knew the inside or it's range

”Don't know” was a big phrase actually….

Layering up so much made him suffocate
But ironically he breathed ..

Free….

Bridged the gap between his soul and himself

Or widened it by living somewhere else ..


Trembling hands

Though were ready to dance..


So quiet and depressing

Though jumped at my glance…

He chose directions randomly with closed eyes
Blank and emotionless

Sometimes he shocked with insanity
Called it a surprise…

No one could understand his words

I myself couldn’t get them..


The note read

”Don't see me
Don’t hear me
I am locked somewhere

Out of course….

Don't ask
Don’t tell
I can't guess what's the force…”

He wavered from the seen
Nodded at the unseen...

Understood something..
Ignored the supreme….

” I’ve lost her
Why do I feel so?

Either kill me once or take me with a blow
Don't make me squirm with a laugh….
Please don't rate me as a show off!!
I don't want to show anything

I myself can't see

How can a small person tell where’s the lost key?

Can't tell
I don't have anything to tell

Can't walk with any one
I need a tomb of light to dwell
To seek the peace that I’ve been missing

Exposing the pains that I should be kissing…

My love isn’t a failure
But
I am..

A shivering little heart covered with glam..

My senses are dead

I cannot feel

I am hanging on my locked room's fan

Please switch on the death wheel….”

http://conundrum1989.blogspot.com/2008/05/suicide-case.html

Anonymous said...

very well written...

Alec said...

well said my friend
Regards

Jyoti Dixit said...

I worried that if you left,
I'd find nobody else.

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.

Dr. Pragya bajaj said...

so true 4 most if not all

Rashmi Yadav said...

There was a time when I felt I could face any challenge
Because you were there with me.

Now I see that you need someone you can get close to
Who won't fall apart if you need to go.
well written

Anonymous said...

I worried that if you left,
I'd find nobody else.

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine

Er. Paayal Sharma said...

I remember a time, not so long ago, when I felt afraid
To be apart from you.

I worried that if you left,
I'd find nobody else.

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.
nice one

Dr. Neha Srivastav said...

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.

Anonymous said...

I worried that if you left,
I'd find nobody else.

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine

Anonymous said...

well said ..nicely composed

Anonymous said...

very true words

Ashok said...

truely said well composed

Prachi Pandey said...

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine

Anonymous said...

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.

Rohit Sharma said...

nicely written..well said

Anonymous said...

Now I see that you need someone you can get close to
Who won't fall apart if you need to go.

I remember a time, not so long ago, when I felt afraid
To be apart from you.

Anonymous said...

There was a time when I felt I could face any challenge
Because you were there with me.

Now I see that you need someone you can get close to
Who won't fall apart if you need to go.

Anonymous said...

nicely composed

Dr. Neha Srivastav said...

I worried that if you left,
I'd find nobody else.

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.

Dr.Nishi Chauhan said...

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine

Er. Puja Kapoor said...

Now I see that you need someone you can get close to
Who won't fall apart if you need to go.

I remember a time, not so long ago, when I felt afraid
To be apart from you

Anonymous said...

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.

jinksy said...

We are always given enough strength to deal with what life throws at us, if we realse this is how we learn to be better people.

[Ragini]. said...

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine


the irony of the last line defines the depth of ur love for the person.
well written.... keep posting!

Anonymous said...

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.
Heart touching

Anonymous said...

Now I see that you need someone you can get close to
Who won't fall apart if you need to go.

Alec said...

very well composed

Anonymous said...

I worried that if you left,
I'd find nobody else.

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.

अनु मिश्रा said...

I worried that if you left,
I'd find nobody else.

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine

Ria Taneja said...

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.
VERY WELL COMPOSED

Swati said...

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.

Tulip Banerjee said...

I worried that if you left,
I'd find nobody else.

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.

Ria said...

There was a time when I felt I could face any challenge
Because you were there with me.

Now I see that you need someone you can get close to
Who won't fall apart if you need to go.

Anonymous said...

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.

Er. Nidhi Mishra said...

There was a time when I needed you desperately.
Because I was so alone, and you were the only one who could reach me.

Alec said...

There was a time when I felt I could face any challenge
Because you were there with me.

Now I see that you need someone you can get close to
Who won't fall apart if you need to go.

Tracy said...

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.

Tracy said...

There was a time when I needed you desperately.
Because I was so alone, and you were the only one who could reach me.

Mehnaaz said...

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.
Kudos...

Shalini Chopra said...

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.

Austeen Sufi said...

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.

Richa Saxena said...

I remember a time, not so long ago, when I felt afraid
To be apart from you.

I worried that if you left,
I'd find nobody else.

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine

Shilpi Verma said...

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine

Ruchika Mittal said...

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine

Dr. Gunjan Gehlot said...

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.

Dr.Ruchika Rastogi said...

I remember a time, not so long ago, when I felt afraid
To be apart from you.

I worried that if you left,
I'd find nobody else.


well said

Trisha Pandey said...

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine

too good

David O. Brink said...

Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine

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