Remember a time
Wednesday, January 7, 2009
There was a time when I needed you desperately.
Because I was so alone, and you were the only one who could reach me.
There was a time when I felt I could face any challenge
Because you were there with me.
Now I see that you need someone you can get close to
Who won't fall apart if you need to go.
I remember a time, not so long ago, when I felt afraid
To be apart from you.
I worried that if you left,
I'd find nobody else.
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.
65 comments:
well composed
well said !!
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.
nice lines...
take care
Now I see that you need someone you can get close to
Who won't fall apart if you need to go.
I remember a time, not so long ago, when I felt afraid
To be apart from you.
WELL WRITTEN
well composed
well said as well as well composed..
Whatever it may bring….
He asked some unanswerable mysteries so strange..
Unknowingly knew the inside or it's range
”Don't know” was a big phrase actually….
Layering up so much made him suffocate
But ironically he breathed ..
Free….
Bridged the gap between his soul and himself
Or widened it by living somewhere else ..
Trembling hands
Though were ready to dance..
So quiet and depressing
Though jumped at my glance…
He chose directions randomly with closed eyes
Blank and emotionless
Sometimes he shocked with insanity
Called it a surprise…
No one could understand his words
I myself couldn’t get them..
The note read
”Don't see me
Don’t hear me
I am locked somewhere
Out of course….
Don't ask
Don’t tell
I can't guess what's the force…”
He wavered from the seen
Nodded at the unseen...
Understood something..
Ignored the supreme….
” I’ve lost her
Why do I feel so?
Either kill me once or take me with a blow
Don't make me squirm with a laugh….
Please don't rate me as a show off!!
I don't want to show anything
I myself can't see
How can a small person tell where’s the lost key?
Can't tell
I don't have anything to tell
Can't walk with any one
I need a tomb of light to dwell
To seek the peace that I’ve been missing
Exposing the pains that I should be kissing…
My love isn’t a failure
But
I am..
A shivering little heart covered with glam..
My senses are dead
I cannot feel
I am hanging on my locked room's fan
Please switch on the death wheel….”
http://conundrum1989.blogspot.com/2008/05/suicide-case.html
well wriitten
very well written...
well said my friend
Regards
I worried that if you left,
I'd find nobody else.
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.
nicely composed
so true 4 most if not all
There was a time when I felt I could face any challenge
Because you were there with me.
Now I see that you need someone you can get close to
Who won't fall apart if you need to go.
well written
I worried that if you left,
I'd find nobody else.
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine
I remember a time, not so long ago, when I felt afraid
To be apart from you.
I worried that if you left,
I'd find nobody else.
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.
nice one
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.
well composed
very well said
I worried that if you left,
I'd find nobody else.
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine
well said ..nicely composed
lovely composition
very true words
truely said well composed
well written....
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine
nice one
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.
nicely written..well said
Now I see that you need someone you can get close to
Who won't fall apart if you need to go.
I remember a time, not so long ago, when I felt afraid
To be apart from you.
There was a time when I felt I could face any challenge
Because you were there with me.
Now I see that you need someone you can get close to
Who won't fall apart if you need to go.
nicely composed
I worried that if you left,
I'd find nobody else.
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.
good composition
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine
Now I see that you need someone you can get close to
Who won't fall apart if you need to go.
I remember a time, not so long ago, when I felt afraid
To be apart from you
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.
We are always given enough strength to deal with what life throws at us, if we realse this is how we learn to be better people.
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine
the irony of the last line defines the depth of ur love for the person.
well written.... keep posting!
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.
Heart touching
Now I see that you need someone you can get close to
Who won't fall apart if you need to go.
very well composed
I worried that if you left,
I'd find nobody else.
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.
I worried that if you left,
I'd find nobody else.
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.
VERY WELL COMPOSED
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.
I worried that if you left,
I'd find nobody else.
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.
There was a time when I felt I could face any challenge
Because you were there with me.
Now I see that you need someone you can get close to
Who won't fall apart if you need to go.
well composed
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.
There was a time when I needed you desperately.
Because I was so alone, and you were the only one who could reach me.
There was a time when I felt I could face any challenge
Because you were there with me.
Now I see that you need someone you can get close to
Who won't fall apart if you need to go.
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.
superb!!
There was a time when I needed you desperately.
Because I was so alone, and you were the only one who could reach me.
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.
Kudos...
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.
I remember a time, not so long ago, when I felt afraid
To be apart from you.
I worried that if you left,
I'd find nobody else.
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.
I remember a time, not so long ago, when I felt afraid
To be apart from you.
I worried that if you left,
I'd find nobody else.
well said
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine
too good
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine
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