Miss NUCLEUS
Wednesday, January 14, 2009
An ion who once held my bond
accelerated far beyond.
As my potential stayed at ground,
she cyclotronned around and round.
After an eternity,
this proton has returned to me.
Why so long? Lorentz contraction?
Or just diffraction and distraction?
Regardless, I'm excited to embrace
her positively charged-up space.
But it seems that she attracts a crowd:
her head's in an electron cloud.
Miss NUCLEUS is hard to see
when swimming in her electron sea.
As leptons leap around the belle,
I can't break through the outer Shel.
Yes, I am bondless, gassy, noble.
Interactions make me mobile.
My charge repulsion, to be frank,
is so large I'd rather walk the Planck.
I know her spacetime line is steep,
with state transitions she must keep.
But just a quantum of her time
to pair up with her friend in rhyme?
89 comments:
good revision of Physics :-)
a perfect technocratic poem from a true technocrat
Yes, I am bondless, gassy, noble.
Interactions make me mobile.
My charge repulsion, to be frank,
is so large I'd rather walk the Planck.
master of physics well written sir
regards
Yes, I am bondless, gassy, noble.
Interactions make me mobile.
My charge repulsion, to be frank,
is so large I'd rather walk the Planck.
AB AAYA HAI APNE ASLI RANG MA
SAHI HAI MAAMU
thats technocratic. loved it man loved it :)
unique one!!
I know her spacetime line is steep,
with state transitions she must keep.
But just a quantum of her time
to pair up with her friend in rhyme?
I know her spacetime line is steep,
with state transitions she must keep.
But just a quantum of her time
to pair up with her friend in rhyme?
That was nice
oye ye kya tha????
u r really anitique ite sud be put in musesum
Miss NUCLEUS is hard to see
when swimming in her electron sea.
As leptons leap around the belle,
I can't break through the outer Shel.
After an eternity,
this proton has returned to me.
Why so long? Lorentz contraction?
Or just diffraction and distraction?
Physics of love :-)
A poor student of Physics I might be but a great admirer of emotions coming directly from heart (Language no bar :-P)
very scientifically...oops.. wonderfully written :-)
nice poem , wel written , with much of flow .. thnx for sharing .
I know her spacetime line is steep,
with state transitions she must keep.
But just a quantum of her time
to pair up with her friend in rhyme?
SIMPLY OUTSTANDING BONDING PF PHYSICS N LOVE
An ion who once held my bond
accelerated far beyond.
As my potential stayed at ground,
she cyclotronned around and round.
LOVE SCIENTIFIED
nice 2 read somethng diffrent
physics and psycholgy of love boinded nicely by u sir
Well written in a diffrent way
Yes, I am bondless, gassy, noble.
Interactions make me mobile.
My charge repulsion, to be frank,
is so large I'd rather walk the Planck
I know her spacetime line is steep,
with state transitions she must keep.
But just a quantum of her time
to pair up with her friend in rhyme?
good one :-)
Physics of love
:-)
too good man
I know her spacetime line is steep,
with state transitions she must keep.
But just a quantum of her time
to pair up with her friend in rhyme?
well written.........
In the arithmetic of love, one plus one equals everything, and two minus one equals nothing.
Relationships are like glass. Sometimes it's better to leave them broken than try to hurt yourself putting it back together
I prithee send me back my heart,
Since I cannot have thine;
For if from yours you will not part,
Why, then, shouldst thou have mine?
It's so curious: one can resist tears and 'behave' very well in the hardest hours of grief. But then someone makes you a friendly sign behind a window, or one notices that a flower that was in bud only yesterday has suddenly blossomed, or a letter slips from a drawer... and everything collapses
With what a deep devotedness of woe
I wept thy absence - o'er and o'er again
Thinking of thee, still thee, till thought grew pain,
And memory, like a drop that, night and day,
Falls cold and ceaseless, wore my heart away!
Invisible tears are the hardest to wipe away. Just let it out, my friend.
Miss NUCLEUS is hard to see
when swimming in her electron sea.
As leptons leap around the belle,
I can't break through the outer Shel
Giving up doesn't always mean you are weak; sometimes it means that you are strong enough to let go.
With what a deep devotedness of woe
I wept thy absence - o'er and o'er again
Thinking of thee, still thee, till thought grew pain,
And memory, like a drop that, night and day,
Falls cold and ceaseless, wore my heart away!
With what a deep devotedness of woe
I wept thy absence - o'er and o'er again
Thinking of thee, still thee, till thought grew pain,
And memory, like a drop that, night and day,
Falls cold and ceaseless, wore my heart away!
u wrote in typical engineers way......
Nice
Man performs and engenders so much more than he can or should have to bear. That's how he finds that he can bear anything.
Regardless, I'm excited to embrace
her positively charged-up space.
But it seems that she attracts a crowd:
her head's in an electron cloud.
well composed
aah that was diffrent n nice
Heavy hearts, like heavy clouds in the sky, are best relieved by the letting of a little water.
good poem.....it reminds me physics lessons....
good one..
After an eternity,
this proton has returned to me.
Why so long? Lorentz contraction?
Or just diffraction and distraction?
that was nice
know her spacetime line is steep,
with state transitions she must keep.
But just a quantum of her time
to pair up with her friend in rhyme?
Regardless, I'm excited to embrace
her positively charged-up space
Miss NUCLEUS is hard to see
when swimming in her electron sea.
As leptons leap around the belle,
I can't break through the outer Shel.
its diffrent and i loved it
I know her spacetime line is steep,
with state transitions she must keep.
But just a quantum of her time
to pair up with her friend in rhyme?
Yes, I am bondless, gassy, noble.
Interactions make me mobile.
My charge repulsion, to be frank,
is so large I'd rather walk the Planck
Regardless, I'm excited to embrace
her positively charged-up space.
But it seems that she attracts a crowd:
her head's in an electron cloud.
I know her spacetime line is steep,
with state transitions she must keep.
But just a quantum of her time
to pair up with her friend in rhyme?
After an eternity,
this proton has returned to me.
Why so long? Lorentz contraction?
Or just diffraction and distraction?
वाह क्या बात है!!हमेशा की तरह एक और बेहतरीन कविता, सुन्दर रचना
धन्यवाद
Yes, I am bondless, gassy, noble.
Interactions make me mobile.
My charge repulsion, to be frank,
is so large I'd rather walk the Planck
that was unique
I know her spacetime line is steep,
with state transitions she must keep.
But just a quantum of her time
to pair up with her friend in rhyme?
WELL COMPOSED
Regardless, I'm excited to embrace
her positively charged-up space.
But it seems that she attracts a crowd:
her head's in an electron cloud.
your amazing poet,
great words,
thanks for your comment on my weblog.
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तख़लीक़-ए-नज़र
बहुत बडिया भैइ मान गये लगे रहो
:) :)..Amazing!
It is a different kind of Poem...what a good combination of physics and poetry!very well crafted.
I know her spacetime line is steep,
with state transitions she must keep.
But just a quantum of her time
to pair up with her friend in rhyme?
gr8 composition
Yes, I am bondless, gassy, noble.
Interactions make me mobile.
My charge repulsion, to be frank,
is so large I'd rather walk the Planck.
nice
Miss NUCLEUS is hard to see
when swimming in her electron sea.
As leptons leap around the belle,
I can't break through the outer Shel
After an eternity,
this proton has returned to me.
Why so long? Lorentz contraction?
Or just diffraction and distraction?
Thanks for your comment, Avinash. And although you have heard this a million times already, let em say thi again. Thou art a fantastic writer!
Cheers
Rohit
Realy very nice creation!... I like it!....thanks for visit and nice comment too!
too good man
Regardless, I'm excited to embrace
her positively charged-up space.
But it seems that she attracts a crowd:
her head's in an electron cloud.
hey
very creative poem and i think you are very interested in chemistry.its really funny as well as interesting to recite your poem aloud.
cheers!
After an eternity,
this proton has returned to me.
Why so long? Lorentz contraction?
Or just diffraction and distraction?
As my potential stayed at ground,
she cyclotronned around and round.
Miss NUCLEUS is hard to see
when swimming in her electron sea.
As leptons leap around the belle,
I can't break through the outer Shel.
techno love :-)
Miss NUCLEUS is hard to see
when swimming in her electron sea.
As leptons leap around the belle,
I can't break through the outer Shel.
Yes, I am bondless, gassy, noble.
Interactions make me mobile.
My charge repulsion, to be frank,
is so large I'd rather walk the Planck.
Regardless, I'm excited to embrace
her positively charged-up space.
But it seems that she attracts a crowd:
her head's in an electron cloud.
techno Love :-)
I know her spacetime line is steep,
with state transitions she must keep.
But just a quantum of her time
to pair up with her friend in rhyme?
I know her spacetime line is steep,
with state transitions she must keep.
But just a quantum of her time
to pair up with her friend in rhyme?
I know her spacetime line is steep,
with state transitions she must keep.
But just a quantum of her time
to pair up with her friend in rhyme?
Miss NUCLEUS is hard to see
when swimming in her electron sea.
As leptons leap around the belle,
I can't break through the outer Shel
After an eternity,
this proton has returned to me.
Why so long? Lorentz contraction?
Or just diffraction and distraction?
Regardless, I'm excited to embrace
her positively charged-up space.
But it seems that she attracts a crowd:
her head's in an electron cloud
After an eternity,
this proton has returned to me.
Why so long? Lorentz contraction?
Or just diffraction and distraction?
Regardless, I'm excited to embrace
her positively charged-up space.
But it seems that she attracts a crowd:
her head's in an electron cloud.
Yes, I am bondless, gassy, noble.
Interactions make me mobile.
My charge repulsion, to be frank,
is so large I'd rather walk the Planck.
techno love
Today I feel I can either be close to you,
Or let you go
And I'll be fine.
Yes, I am bondless, gassy, noble.
Interactions make me mobile.
My charge repulsion, to be frank,
is so large I'd rather walk the Planck
True tecnocrat love
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