I still yearn for you

Saturday, February 21, 2009

Meeting you
was pure destiny,
You and I
were meant to be.

May be not now
but someday soon,
We'll meet not under the sun
but beneath the moon.
cry, complain & romance till dawn

We'll watch the stars'
till they fade away,
but we won't fade
together we'll always stay.

This is the day
I'm waiting for,
from that day
I'll love you more and more.

I can't wait to watch
the sun set with you,
every sunset from that day
'till the rest of our lives are through.
I still yearn for you.....

88 comments:

Prachi Pandey said...

We'll meet not under the sun
but beneath the moon.
cry, complain & romance till dawn

the yearn for love and care very much evident

Er. Nidhi Mishra said...

We'll watch the stars'
till they fade away,
but we won't fade
together we'll always stay.


wow!!!

i am what i am said...

wow!!!!!!i hope the yearning ends soon.beautiful poem. i made my guy read it too. made us realize how love makes everything right. and thanks for all your wonderful comments on my posts. i love reading them.

regards

Puja said...

'till the rest of our lives are through.
I still yearn for you.....
thats what love is no matter what happens you still wait and yearn

Ria Taneja said...

that was heart touching and goes to show how much you yearn for ur beloved

Dr. Neha Srivastav said...

what a perfect way of expressing ur feelings. That was really straight out of heart specially these lines

cry, complain & romance till dawn

shows that you have complins to make as well as love to express.

Too good Avinash, felt it deep inside the heart

Hope ur yearning ends soon.

Ritu said...

I can't wait to watch
the sun set with you,
every sunset from that day
'till the rest of our lives are through.
I still yearn for you.....

imean the love you have for ur beloved is very much evident
she gotta be on of the luckiest on the planet, i sincerely hope ur wait gets over soon.

Take care
Regards

Anonymous said...

May be not now
but someday soon,
We'll meet not under the sun
but beneath the moon.
cry, complain & romance till dawn

Dr.Ruchika Rastogi said...

We'll watch the stars'
till they fade away,
but we won't fade
together we'll always stay.

such a soul & heart touching poem
wish both of you stay together...

Dr.Ruchika Rastogi said...

Wait? you say wait?" my indignant reply.
"Lord, I need answers, I need to know why!
Is your hand shortened? Or have you not heard?
By faith I have asked, and I'm claiming your Word.


"My future and all to which I relate
Hangs in the balance, and you tell me to wait?
I'm needing a 'yes', a go-ahead sign,
Or even a 'no' to which I can resign.


"You promised, dear Lord, that if we believe,
We need but to ask, and we shall receive.
And Lord I've been asking, and this is my cry:
I'm weary of asking! I need a reply."


Then quietly, softly, I learned of my fate,
As my Master replied again, "Wait."
So I slumped in my chair, defeated and taut,
And grumbled to God, "So, I'm waiting for what?"

Dr. Gunjan Gehlot said...

I can't wait to watch
the sun set with you,
every sunset from that day
'till the rest of our lives are through.
I still yearn for you.....

True love waits and it always comes back, urs will too

Dr. Gunjan Gehlot said...

The glow of My comfort late into the night,
The faith that I give when you walk without sight.
The depth that's beyond getting just what you ask,
From an infinite God who makes what you have last.

You'd never know should your pain quickly flee,
What it means that My grace is sufficient for thee.
Yes, your dearest dreams overnight would come true,
But oh, the loss if I lost what I'm doing in you.

So, be silent, my child, and in time you will see,
That the greatest of gifts is to truly know me.
And though oft My answers seem terribly late,
My most precious answer of all is still "WAIT

Dr.Rita Raman said...

lovely poem n feeling expressed with great love n pain.

liked these lines most

May be not now
but someday soon,
We'll meet not under the sun
but beneath the moon.
cry, complain & romance till dawn

Ritika Pandey said...

well expressed feelings, hard to understand some one's else felse feeling but stil it was felt deep inside.

Take care.....

Amrita Kumari said...

that was very well written, love makes you wait but true one always comes back

Life is all about timing... the unreachable becomes reachable, the unavailable become available, the unattainable... attainable. Have the patience, wait it out It's all about timing

Anonymous said...

This is the day
I'm waiting for,
from that day
I'll love you more and more.

I can't wait to watch
the sun set with you,
every sunset from that day
'till the rest of our lives are through.
I still yearn for you.....


WELL COMPOSED AND EXPRESSED

Ruchika Mittal said...

READING YOUR POEM I FELT HOW MUCH YOU LOVE THAT PERSON, AND HOW MUCH YOU ARE WAITING FOR IT.

I can't wait to watch
the sun set with you

A well expressed feelings and in these lines it shows you are waiting fot it to come back.

'till the rest of our lives are through.
I still yearn for you.....

Good things come to those who wait

Anonymous said...

think on this and consider if its worth waiting for those who dont deserve

A girl can wait for the right man to come along but in the meantime that still doesn't mean she can't have a wonderful time with all the wrong ones.

Shweta Saxena said...

The poem expresses the intensity of ur love and ur strength of keep on waiting and wait for good times.

Hope u get ur love…….a sincere wish

Anonymous said...

I can't wait to watch
the sun set with you,
every sunset from that day
'till the rest of our lives are through.
I still yearn for you.....

Dr.Nishi Chauhan said...

that was well written Avinash, hope ut wait gets over soon n u get what u want

Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks....But bears it out ev’n to the edge of doom

Dr. Palki Vajpayee said...

May be not now
but someday soon,
We'll meet not under the sun
but beneath the moon.
cry, complain & romance till dawn

LAST LINE OF ABOVE STANZA IS HEART AND SOUL OF POEM...WELL COMPOSED

Love has features which pierce all hearts, he wears a bandage which conceals the faults of those beloved. He has wings, he comes quickly and flies away the same.

Anonymous said...

Love alone is capable of uniting living beings in such a way as to complete and fulfill them, for it alone takes them and joins them by what is deepest in themselves.

Anonymous said...

Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs.
Being purged, a fire sparkling in lovers' eyes.
Being vexed, a sea nourished with lovers' tears.
What is it else?
A madness most discreet,
a choking gall and a preserving sweet.

Anonymous said...

Sometimes we let affection, go unspoken,
Sometimes we let our love go unexpressed,
Sometimes we can't find words to tell our feelings,
Especially towards those we love the best.

Anonymous said...

True love is a discipline in which each divines the secret self of the other and refuses to believe in the mere daily self.

Dr. Aradhna said...

We'll meet not under the sun
but beneath the moon.
cry, complain & romance till dawn

heart touching one, shows love evenif u have complains with it...

Er. Snigddha Aggarwal said...

We'll watch the stars'
till they fade away,
but we won't fade
together we'll always stay.

lovely composition

Austeen Sufi said...

I can't wait to watch
the sun set with you,
every sunset from that day
'till the rest of our lives are through.
I still yearn for you...

too good

Dr. Pragya bajaj said...

If he’s the one you want, the one you love, and the only one who can make you happy then no matter how long you’ve liked him and no matter what people say, you should keep waiting.

Er. Nidhi Mishra said...

You know that place between sleep and awake, the place where you can still remember dreaming? That’s where she will always love you. That’s where will be waiting.

Shilpi Verma said...

I can't wait to watch
the sun set with you,
every sunset from that day
'till the rest of our lives are through.
I still yearn for you

true love waits and suceeds always, urs will too, surely.

Well written

Tripti said...

A real friend may be
Far, very far in miles,
But near, very near
In heart-smiles.

Indrani said...

Beautiful lines penned!

Richa Saxena said...

I can't wait to watch
the sun set with you,
every sunset from that day
'till the rest of our lives are through.
I still yearn for you.....

beautiful composition

Anonymous said...

I can't wait to watch
the sun set with you,
every sunset from that day
'till the rest of our lives are through.
I still yearn for you.....

Shailly Chandra said...

very nice poem u have written, feelings expressed in simple word but felt deep inside

Shailly Chandra said...

Desperately, helplessly, longingly, I cred; Quietly, patiently, lovingly, God replied. I pled and I wept for a clue to my fate…and the Master so gently said, “Wait.”

Anonymous said...

May be not now
but someday soon,
We'll meet not under the sun
but beneath the moon.
cry, complain & romance till dawn

We'll watch the stars'
till they fade away,
but we won't fade
together we'll always stay

Anonymous said...

This is the day
I'm waiting for,
from that day
I'll love you more and more

Mehnaaz said...

but beneath the moon.
cry, complain & romance till dawn

last line is what i liked most, expresses all the love, anger n care

Kanupriya said...

I can't wait to watch
the sun set with you,
every sunset from that day
'till the rest of our lives are through.
I still yearn for you.....

expressions expressed in very delicate manner...

well composed

Ria said...

May be not now
but someday soon,
We'll meet not under the sun
but beneath the moon.
cry, complain & romance till dawn

well written.......

Anonymous said...

This is the day
I'm waiting for,
from that day
I'll love you more and more

Tulip Banerjee said...

Do you want me to tell you something really subversive? Love is everything it's cracked up to be. That's why people are so cynical about it. . . . It really is worth fighting for, being brave for, risking everything for. And the trouble is, if you don't risk everything, you risk even more.

अनु मिश्रा said...

भावनाओ को व्यक्त करती एक सुंदर और बेहतरीन रचना.

Patty said...

What a beautiful poem for young lovers.

Pretty Me!! said...

the second para was just wow :)

gargi said...

Simply BEAUTIFUL! :)

Anonymous said...

May be not now
but someday soon,
We'll meet not under the sun
but beneath the moon.
cry, complain & romance till dawn

Jyoti Dixit said...

lovely heart touching compositiob

Anouska Awasthi said...

dont wait & cry for those who dont even think of you, You know why i am saying this.

Start Living, Stop exsisting....

Take Care

Ritu said...

well written, simple words yey so well expressed.
Simply loved it.
Regards

Trisha Pandey said...

I can't wait to watch
the sun set with you,
every sunset from that day
'till the rest of our lives are through.
I still yearn for you.....

lovely lines

Preeti said...

second stanza was too good
well composed

Austeen Sufi said...

I can't wait to watch
the sun set with you,
every sunset from that day
'till the rest of our lives are through.
I still yearn for you

R. Ramesh said...

oooff..who's that? the lucky one??!!!

R. Ramesh said...

oooff..who's that? the lucky one??!!!

R. Ramesh said...

oooff..who's that? the lucky one??!!!

R. Ramesh said...

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Dr.Ruchika Rastogi said...

This is the day
I'm waiting for,
from that day
I'll love you more and more

Swati said...

This is the day
I'm waiting for,
from that day
I'll love you more and more

very well composed

Anonymous said...

There is nothing I wouldn't suffer if it would do him any good. I never thought any one could feel so. I used to think if I loved anybody I would want him to do everything for me and wait on me as if I were a princess. But that is not the way at all.

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nituscorner said...

Lovely heart warming poem.....every stanza touches a person. great one avinash.

Rashmi said...

May be not now
but someday soon,
We'll meet not under the sun
but beneath the moon.
cry, complain & romance till dawn

lovely lines penned down, aboce lines are heart n soul of poem

loved n liked it
Regards.

Priya Talwar said...

very well composed, love it thoroughly
regards

Ruchi said...

This is the day
I'm waiting for,
from that day
I'll love you more and more

very well composed

Priya Mittal said...

May be not now
but someday soon,
We'll meet not under the sun
but beneath the moon.
cry, complain & romance till dawn

WOW!!!
lovely lines

Shalini said...

well composed, loved it....

Shilpi said...

May be not now
but someday soon,
We'll meet not under the sun
but beneath the moon.
cry, complain & romance till dawn

beautiful written lines....

David O. Brink said...

well composed, lucky gal whom u love...
God bless ya

अनिल कान्त : said...

ultimate ...superb...deapth of emotions... lovely poem


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Dr. Pragya bajaj said...

This is the day
I'm waiting for,
from that day
I'll love you more and more

R. Ramesh said...

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Ritu said...
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Ritika Pandey said...

May be not now
but someday soon,
We'll meet not under the sun
but beneath the moon.
cry, complain & romance till dawn

second stanza is heart and soul of poem
well written

Vinisha said...

True from the heart in every sense - right from the destiny to the moons and the stars :)

अल्पना वर्मा said...

'I can't wait to watch
the sun set with you,
every sunset from that day
'till the rest of our lives are through.
I still yearn for you.....'

Very well expressed thoughts..I love it.

[Ragini]. said...

I can't wait to watch
the sun set with you,
every sunset from that day
'till the rest of our lives are through.
I still yearn for you.....


well.. to be frank... i loved each and every word of it n if i paste .. i lb pasting the whole poem again...one of ur very best!

Sagarika said...

May be not now
but someday soon,
We'll meet not under the sun
but beneath the moon.
cry, complain & romance till dawn

well composed

Tripti Pandey said...

May be not now
but someday soon,
We'll meet not under the sun
but beneath the moon.
cry, complain & romance till dawn

WOW!!

Aarti said...

We'll watch the stars'
till they fade away,
but we won't fade
together we'll always stay

good one

Radhika said...

This is the day
I'm waiting for,
from that day
I'll love you more and more

Brosreview said...

Lovely!!! "I'll love you more and more". Although other lines are equally good, it is this line, the repetition of the word "more" that grabs attention. Good work!!!

Becky said...

This related to something in my life.To much so,lovely writing.

Rupali said...

hope ur yearning ends soon

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