tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post4560176717559192102..comments2023-07-05T21:20:00.918+05:30Comments on Avinash- The Pariah...Then there was you: I shall keep my heart silentअविनाशhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07179380257537462601noreply@blogger.comBlogger79125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post-66661499754324123682009-03-13T14:19:00.000+05:302009-03-13T14:19:00.000+05:30well composedwell composedDr. Rupali Rastogihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06884229630706394693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post-24114850256097856142009-03-08T07:26:00.001+05:302009-03-08T07:26:00.001+05:30You carried the soul from my body and yet you are ...You carried the soul from my body <BR/>and yet you are still part of that soul;<BR/>you inflicted pain, but are still the remedy.Anitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13007399246152816542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post-1345013961389559182009-03-08T07:26:00.000+05:302009-03-08T07:26:00.000+05:30Who would explain this to my darling?Tossed and be...Who would explain this to my darling?<BR/>Tossed and bewildered, like a flickering candle,<BR/>I roam about in the fire of love;<BR/>sleepless eyes, restless body.<BR/>She neither comes, nor sends any message.Anitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13007399246152816542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post-84486181491969648602009-02-19T01:38:00.000+05:302009-02-19T01:38:00.000+05:30How will I pass the dark dungeon nightwithout your...How will I pass the dark dungeon night<BR/>without your face before me,.<BR/>Suddenly, using a thousand wiles,<BR/>those enchanting eyes robbed me<BR/>of my tranquil mind;<BR/><BR/>nicely composed....expresses the dilemma very wellRaginihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10962819971587665574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post-69869405670975106312009-02-18T19:49:00.000+05:302009-02-18T19:49:00.000+05:30Tossed and bewildered, like a flickering candle,I ...Tossed and bewildered, like a flickering candle,<BR/>I roam about in the fire of love;<BR/>sleepless eyes, restless body<BR/><BR/>nice compositionPriya Mittalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04249316345126971559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post-67949314519654862742009-02-18T14:53:00.000+05:302009-02-18T14:53:00.000+05:30Tossed and bewildered, like a flickering candle,I ...Tossed and bewildered, like a flickering candle,<BR/>I roam about in the fire of love;<BR/>sleepless eyes, restless body<BR/><BR/>good oneRadhikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06224505871640863938noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post-15651809658727776302009-02-18T14:45:00.000+05:302009-02-18T14:45:00.000+05:30In honour of the day, should I meet my belovedagai...In honour of the day, should I meet my beloved<BR/>again, the one who has lured me so long,<BR/>I shall keep my heart silent<BR/>and so get a chance to practise her trickery<BR/><BR/>nicely composedAnitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13007399246152816542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post-28236140427001190092009-02-18T14:25:00.000+05:302009-02-18T14:25:00.000+05:30Tossed and bewildered, like a flickering candle,I ...Tossed and bewildered, like a flickering candle,<BR/>I roam about in the fire of love;<BR/>sleepless eyes, restless body<BR/><BR/>lovely compoTripti Pandeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07342591966673276449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post-25938829781870199452009-02-18T00:23:00.000+05:302009-02-18T00:23:00.000+05:30very well composedloved it.....very well composed<BR/>loved it.....Sagarikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17731155519210069731noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post-38097445573070232852009-02-18T00:11:00.000+05:302009-02-18T00:11:00.000+05:30Suddenly, using a thousand wiles,those enchanting ...Suddenly, using a thousand wiles,<BR/>those enchanting eyes robbed me<BR/>of my tranquil mind;Amrita Kumarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00336265653827676556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post-28263464706807362232009-02-17T20:56:00.000+05:302009-02-17T20:56:00.000+05:30so amazing!! i loved it!so amazing!! i loved it!Miss Sunshinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09047755751113996004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post-45007011843448532192009-02-17T10:46:00.000+05:302009-02-17T10:46:00.000+05:30Tossed and bewildered, like a flickering candle,I ...Tossed and bewildered, like a flickering candle,<BR/>I roam about in the fire of love;<BR/>sleepless eyes, restless body<BR/><BR/>nice onePriya Mittalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04249316345126971559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post-91943914079870770102009-02-17T10:44:00.000+05:302009-02-17T10:44:00.000+05:30Who would explain this to my darling?Tossed and be...Who would explain this to my darling?<BR/>Tossed and bewildered, like a flickering candle,<BR/>I roam about in the fire of love<BR/><BR/>lovelyShreya Rajputhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05396309651675405583noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post-58978406017832908532009-02-17T10:41:00.000+05:302009-02-17T10:41:00.000+05:30well composedwell composedJyoti Dixithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09790412786093696116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post-54087669017532685312009-02-17T10:37:00.000+05:302009-02-17T10:37:00.000+05:30Suddenly, using a thousand wiles,those enchanting ...Suddenly, using a thousand wiles,<BR/>those enchanting eyes robbed me<BR/>of my tranquil mind;<BR/><BR/>well expressed thoughtsAusteen Sufihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16539248833619827028noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post-5962527722276301022009-02-17T09:23:00.000+05:302009-02-17T09:23:00.000+05:30nicely expressed thoghts with some well meant word...nicely expressed thoghts with some well meant words, well composedRadhikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06224505871640863938noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post-26177248828944739972009-02-17T06:27:00.000+05:302009-02-17T06:27:00.000+05:30wow!a lovely poem..very thoughtfully written about...wow!<BR/>a lovely poem..very thoughtfully written about the flickering heart of a person<BR/>cheers!Femin Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06261731875448040555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post-39457998304264084912009-02-17T00:42:00.000+05:302009-02-17T00:42:00.000+05:30Doubt thou the stars are fire,Doubt the sun doth m...Doubt thou the stars are fire,<BR/>Doubt the sun doth move,<BR/>Doubt truth to be a liar<BR/>but never doubt thy loveRiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16267460345554748940noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post-33118960368069949122009-02-17T00:41:00.000+05:302009-02-17T00:41:00.000+05:30Tossed and bewildered, like a flickering candle,I ...Tossed and bewildered, like a flickering candle,<BR/>I roam about in the fire of love;<BR/>sleepless eyes, restless body<BR/><BR/>nice compositionRiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16267460345554748940noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post-15391176515610771882009-02-17T00:33:00.000+05:302009-02-17T00:33:00.000+05:30much improvement from previous fw poems, but get m...much improvement from previous fw poems, but get mentally strong n move onPallavihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12565108544294436380noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post-29663503478863882512009-02-17T00:32:00.000+05:302009-02-17T00:32:00.000+05:30When my love swears that she is made of truth,I do...When my love swears that she is made of truth,<BR/>I do believe her though I know she lies,<BR/>That she might think me some untutored youth,<BR/>Unlearned in the world's false subtleties.<BR/>Thus vainly thinking that she thinks me young,<BR/>Although she knows my days are past the best,<BR/>Simply I credit her false-speaking tongue:<BR/>On both sides thus is simple truth suppressed:<BR/>But wherefore says she not she is unjust?<BR/>And wherefore say not I that I am old?<BR/>O! love's best habit is in seeming trust,<BR/>And age in love, loves not to have years told:<BR/>Therefore I lie with her, and she with...Pallavihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12565108544294436380noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post-10635444487167253922009-02-17T00:16:00.000+05:302009-02-17T00:16:00.000+05:30Mehnaaz gave you perfect advice...Mehnaaz gave you perfect advice...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post-81381555389247476982009-02-16T23:58:00.000+05:302009-02-16T23:58:00.000+05:30How will I pass the dark dungeon nightwithout your...How will I pass the dark dungeon night<BR/>without your face before me,.<BR/>Suddenly, using a thousand wiles,<BR/>those enchanting eyes robbed me<BR/>of my tranquil mind;<BR/><BR/><BR/>good one, liked the way it has been expressed hereShreya Rajputhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05396309651675405583noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post-54516467475569570282009-02-16T23:53:00.000+05:302009-02-16T23:53:00.000+05:30Tossed and bewildered, like a flickering candle,I ...Tossed and bewildered, like a flickering candle,<BR/>I roam about in the fire of love;<BR/>sleepless eyes, restless body<BR/><BR/>loneliness & pain defined to perfectionEr. Paayal Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07884381219883164628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7452027641017725467.post-66855246669908983122009-02-16T23:51:00.000+05:302009-02-16T23:51:00.000+05:30In honour of the day, should I meet my belovedagai...In honour of the day, should I meet my beloved<BR/>again, the one who has lured me so long,<BR/>I shall keep my heart silent<BR/>and so get a chance to practise her trickeryAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com